• Published 28th Sep 2015
  • 5,215 Views, 9 Comments

As if you could Stop Me - CrimsonEquine



Rarity decides to celebrate her sons birthday with a traditional treat.

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Comments ( 9 )

So is this the one you were talking about yesterday?

Biggest thing: if you're going to have this be a major character, you should really give him a name. Calling him "son" the whole time gets a bit tiring.

This fic lacks an OC tag :ajbemused:

Don't mind me saying this but ... I get the idea (a mother raping her son), I kind of get the premise ... what I don't get is WHY RARITY? She does not seem (at least in my opinion) like the type of pony which would do this.

I would recommend keeping the idea but either going for an OC or another character ... and adding some backstory.

Still, entertaining read.

So if your name is Violent, and this story is one of yours...does that make this a violent story?

Blueblood? Really?

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