• Member Since 7th May, 2015
  • offline last seen Feb 9th, 2023

RainEStar


Shadows cannot exist with light. Where there is light, shadows spawn. There must be balance. And that burden belongs to me...

Comments ( 10 )

and her bobbed with the erratic beat

Some other grammar errors, but other than that, I like it. A nice short read.

Have a like.

That. Was beautiful.

6451274
Thanks for the comment and fave!:pinkiehappy:
It makes me happy when you grin, grin, grin! And it fills me with good cheer!

6451283 No problem! Great story; keep up the good work!

Huh.

I'll be honest, I didn't entirely follow what they were... saying for lack of a better word.

And I'm okay with that.

Pretty good story.

6452142
I didn't think everyone would get everything, I just hoped that you all would get enough to understand the plot. I'm glad you enjoyed the story and didn't let a little bit (lot) of confusion stop you!:pinkiehappy:

Gummy crawled up to her and bumped her with his snout.

Boop the snoot!

Cute read, like and favorite for random booping of the snooting. :twilightsmile:

Interesting, very interesting. Not a whole lot of Gummy stories out there so I found myself enjoying this brief jaunt down fictional lane. I also really enjoyed the way you characterized Vinyl, and the reveal of what was making the sound that was distracting her was handled really well. Good job!

Login or register to comment