• Member Since 23rd Apr, 2012
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FelixDawn


The selfish desire of humanity causes wars and hatred is born on it, and that it's how my hate for humanity was birth.

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A AppleDash fanfic friendship.

Applejack and Rainbow Dash find themselves the subject of gossip at every pony assume they're dating. Yet the question remains to be answered are the rumors are true? or the gossip will break the friendship between this two?

Disclaimer: I do not own My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. It belongs to Hasbro, and Lauren Faust. I do not own any of these characters in any way or how, nor do I claim ownership to the pony franchise.


Sorry for the categories is in correct I'm not good to know the correct categories.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 9 )

I want to see where this goes. Faved! :pinkiesmile:
On a side note, you may want to check your grammar more before posting.

663503 I working in the second part :pinkiehappy:

I check my grammar before posting it so please not talk about that.

Too. Many. Grammar. Mistakes. 'But Applejack no respond' I believe the correct way to write it is; But Applejack didn't respond.
Other that that, I find it a great story.

1176928 You start to acting like a troll!

The concept seems good, but I'm not a very good judge of that. However, you might wanna check your grammar and formatting before posting. It is the bane of my existence to see otherwise good stories to go down the crapper because of grammar. I heard that English isn't your first language, so the best thing I would suggest is to get an editor that can help fix your formatting, grammar, and sentence structure.

Comment posted by WillieNelson deleted Nov 22nd, 2013
Comment posted by Jack Kellar deleted Mar 24th, 2014
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