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Rainbow Dash returns for her summer vacation to find out everypony thinks she's a lesbian... But she's not really, she's not.
Author's Note: Romance for late chapter, category may change for late chapter. Rating Teen for some strong language.
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I can't help but feel you're manipulating the characters for your own ends. They certainly wouldn't act this way in any logical state, and the story itself was pretty repetitive
"Oh no no.. Nothing bad happen!" Twilight muttered.
This line reminded me of Zero Wing.
IN AD 2013 RAINBOW DASH RETURNING PONYVILLAGE
RAINBOW: WHAT HAPPEN?
TWILIGHT: OH NO NO NOTHING BAD HAPPEN.
I'm not going to say much.
1. It is Ponyville. Not "Ponyvillage", although I guess that's the long way of going about it. Still, never heard it said that way.
2. This entire idea is just... *sigh*... unoriginal.
The basic plot is fine, but you need to have someone proof read the story before publishing it. Gramatical mistakes are present in almost every paragraph and are detracting from the flow of the story. Fix the mistakes and it could be an interesting take on Rainbows character
u wot m8
Wow, perfect score so far! I mean, of thumbs down. . . Still, that's pretty impressive!
955464 Thank you for making me laugh.
Also, why do you have the Mane6 and RD tags? Only the Mane6 tag is unnecessary.
955997 Your avatar perfectly exemplifies everything about this fic.
955417 Is called fandom
955474 Unoriginal?
956374 Yes. A fic questioning Dash's sexuality. I can't really say that it hasn't been done before. Maybe not a fic, but the idea itself is just overused.
956460 So?
955913 Read the Author's note.
my sis calls me a lesbian because im "obsessed" with rainbow dash. JUST BECAUSE SHES RAINBOW DOESNT MEAN SHES LESBIAN!!!!!
957770 You so right
I find it funny how you mention you're sick of RD being a lesbian, and then you mention romance later. Who's left to pair her with, Big Mac?
...oh god.
958444 You going to find out late
955913
It's my special talent or some shit.
969805 Why you ask?
you really need to get an editor, but other than that it's fine
>Author's Note: I was sick to see fanfic portraying, Rainbow Dash as a lesbian so I made a fanfic about her and the lesbian rumors.
>sick Rainbow Dash being portrayed as a lesbian
yet a previous story of yours has RD head over heels for Applejack whilst AJ isn't a lesbian
1003750 Your point?
1004923 My point is: You've grown tired of a stereotype that you yourself have written a story about. Seems kinda weird doesn't it?
and of what don't you need one? I haven't offered anything
1004935 And? I wrote one only one time!
Sorry that for another comment that I was going to reply.
1004949 there is no and. Just that it's weird.
1004955
982661 I not need one so not thank!
More soon ?
1020542 Sure
1021089~yay !
1021089
BTW, what's a Rainbow-kun ?
1022933 I have not idea
1024155 : I
1027629 I only know that is come for some japan love name or sometime like that
i dont get why so many people hate the idea of the story. what if she isnt a lesbian? not something to get worked up about javascript:smilie('
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i feel weird reading lesbian stuff even though im not against it. is that bad?
i just realized that my pic is messed up with the alignment
Look, I understand what you are trying to get across here and I agree with you. But you are just forcing this too much. It actually is a real good idea but what I suggest you do is go back to the start and have Rainbow Dash's friends believe her (after a short bit of convincing) and then have the rest of the fic concentrate on them ALL trying to convince the rest of the town shes not a lesbian. After all it makes sense that the rest of the town might still not believe Rainbow even if she stuck to her position, BUT IT MAKES NO SENSE THAT HER FRIENDS WOULD ACT LIKE THIS! If everyone in the world thought I was gay and I told my closest friends I wasn't, and repeated myself when they didn't initially accept that, THEY WOULD BELIEVE ME!
You've made all the wonderful characters of MLP act like the worst friends ever! Do you know why that dlslike bar is so big? It's not made up of people who are addicted to lesbian Dash fics, it's made up of fans of MLP who watch the show because they like the characters. Characters I enjoy immensely. I congradulate you on your ability to make me PO'd at some of my fav characters.
At least I can assure myself by reminding myself you've written every single one of them ridiculously OOC. Except, oddly enough, Rainbow Dash.
You know what, I'm really beginning to like this story. Twilight's acting like she should and I am enjoying the Rainbow X Spike!
Ok, so Twilights gone back to acting OOC and extremely stupid, but the SpikeXRainbow is still good.
CONFLICTING EMOTIONS!
PLEASE CONTINUE BEFORE MY HEAD EXPLODES!!
1041981 Not worry they're just jealous of me after all
1042528 Is funny because those who made a MLP Yuri are making the same think and you people complaining on me
1042546 Is fandom
Like I really not care about dlslike bar I'm fine that at least some people love my fanfic
"Twilight Sparkle watch him go with a broken heart." Are you trying to say that Twi also has a crush on him ?
Also the scene where Dash goes see Tia for advice, the dialogue seems familiar to me somehow...
1043300 Oh no is that, Spike hurt Twilight feelings or something like that.
Well many fanfic have familiar moments.
1043151 Thanks for replying to both my positive and negative comments and understanding that I am merely attempting to review your fic and tell you why I believe it is not recieving good reception and how to alter that fact.
1043151 PS: I do read fanfics where Rainbow is bi, I also read fanfics where all the other characters are bi. Why? Because the show lets us clearly see what the female characters are like and what there relationships are. It is thus far easier to write these characters rather than coming up with the need character traits for a good romantic fic for a male character. Spike is one of the obvious exceptions.
.1043113 That's not funny at all.
Please give me the name of this fic so I can point out the flaws of that fic to that author just as I honestly did to you.
1043903 Well if you want a list of possible 1,000 of MLP Yuri fic