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CrimsonEquine


Improvement is a dire mistress.

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Try harder.

6392226 It just feels like a low-effort, cliche, cheap attempt at parody. Hence my original message.

6392232
did you read the story?

I think this one had some nice, subtle humor blended into the over the top parody.

It was a normal day in Ponyville.

"Remember kids! If it's a Bleeding, don't start reading!"

Ponies were walking along the streets as per usual and having a naturally occurring day.

The suspense is filling me.

Then, up from the sky. The clouds would tear asunder, and darkness swept through into some type of black hole.

Asunder? Wow. This might actually be interesting...

the big asshole came

What a pleasant surprise.

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