Scootaloo has always had a mysterious past, but when she reveals her secrets the her friends, will her friends still accept her, especially after learning she was never even a pony in the first place. With secrets revealed, and new enemies being found everywhere, only time will tell the fate of the Cutie Mark Crusaders.
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Too rushed in introduction. I would have like to see mystery before discovery of vampony. Would have make it more interesting. And dont spoil the story with that title.
Nice idea but I think it's a little rushed in the beginning, it would be good to see more of a background, before she start 'blooming' and how they come to the confession thing
Interesting... A bit too fast on the acceptance there tho... But considering that it's the CMC I was semi-Expecting there to be a "CUTIE MARK CRUSADERS VAMPONIES GO!" bit.
Spiderman wants more.
I like it, please continue to write
Rarity's line made me crack up. I read that in my head in her normal, perfectly calm tone of voice and the sheer absurd deadpanning my mind gave it made it awesome.
*Sees ending
O_O .....
Ah shit
y u so slow writer?
I want moar
Sorry about the long wait.
Either way, we're FINALLY done remodeling the kitchen so i have a bit more time to write now.
Aweh, we don't get to see some massive argument between the CMC and Rarity over Scootaloo?
I bet that Twilight would love to see those books. Maybe the CMC can strike some sort of deal with the mane six.
awesome story and I can't wait to see if Ponyville will find out about Scootaloo!
:3
Well, your punishment has been payed. Scoots now has a full belly as payment for trying to hurt her.
816364 OM NOM NOM!
816851 this is as close to as I'm going to get finding a pic that will go along with this.
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Nice find 817186.
817508 thanks, it took me awhile to find a decent pic, also to bad this story isn't about sweetie bell cause I have the best pic for her.
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rushed, but AWESOME!!!
damn, sweetie belle is a bitch...
moar please!!!
Ah well some mistake here and there but still a nice story
1546813Thanks, this really wasn't very good, and I've improved a bit since i wrote this, now all I need to do is stop screwing around and start writing something.
I am working on a (Sort of) rewrite, but it's a bit different, like using the term 'vampire' instead. Of course I've been working on it for about 2 months but I plan on finishing soon, I'm quite a fast writer, but I find myself writing less often than I should. Perhaps getting the first chapter finished and posted would help a little.
1551197 You know about writings? sometimes you just need to lay off a little and try to have fun then something might pop into your head about what you should write for your stories I do that all the time when i'm stuck in my fiction also try not to be stressed up when writing, it might mess up your creativity
1553309Thanks for the advice, but I already know what I'm going to write, I just need to write it.
why did you cancelled it?
1808434 Sorry, I just didn't like the way it was going. The writing style was rather bad and the idea slowly turned unwelcoming to me.
Please, please tell me why this epic tale was cancelled.
make not cancelled anymore!
1554919
Will you make a new story with this?
8672254
Darkness Rising was originally meant to be a successor to this, so I've sort of done so already. Aside from that, I'm not doing anything else with this idea.
vampire knight reference, cause of the pureblood part or no?
I still think that the "pureblood vampire" reference is a reference to vampire knight, correct me if I'm wrong, but I won't throw a fit maybe
welp you got caught sweetie belle
holy shit