When Octavia gets bitten by a supposed werewolf it opens up a whole new reality to her. She even might gain a couple new friends along the way. (Currently on hiatus due to lack of motivation to complete.)
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1147362 I'm just glad it got updated.
(How do you make it so you respond to the user's name in the comments?)
Edit: Apparently it does it automatically.
Sorry this one took so long but school got in the way and I have other commitments at the moment. Never the less I hope you all enjoy this chapter, I actually took your advice and planned it too so it is hopefully higher quality. Any ways I won't take up any more of your time, now go forth and conquer the internet my minions!
.... go back to your previous chapters and edit them so that a new speaker has a new paragraph also "let's not point fingers" fingers.........
1356802 *weak...
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Okay, fixed the other chapters, thanks.
1356970 np i went back to read the previous chapter to get back into the story and could not understand it without rereading each paragraph
YES!BACON FOR THE BACON GOD!HAMBURGERS FOR THE HAMBURGER THRONE!
1404666 That would be nice. pm me you e-mail so I can send it to you once I've "completed" a chapter. I'd send it to you some other way but I've been rather fond of e-mails as of late.
As for the rest of you, yes, I am starting a new chapter. Also I can tell you now that the new story I'm working on will be human but I won't use some cliche intro or anything. Really the first couple of chapters will be the most interesting chapters but I'll try all the same to beef up the other parts as well.
-Cakesok
(I'm gonna try to start remembering to add a signature so you better get used to that)
Comments are encouraged by the way. It keeps me entertained when I'm bored and don't feel like writing.
fuck you pinkie how dare you interrupt this chapter?i am going to hunt you down and brutally murder you
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FUCK YOU IMMA DO WHAT I WANT
PARTY TIME BITCHES1426587
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Second! I think.....any way great chapter!
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really please check it again, add some comas and puntuation.
lol werewolf octavia FTW
0_o if i ever met her am makeing sure i keep a gun with me so i won't die that way.......
Oh dear god... have you been reading my torture books? I mean seriously.
Is everything alright? None of the other chapters led me to believe that this is where the story was going.
1553052 if you're referring to the rather detailed description of the dismembering of the rabbits, no it's not becoming a grim dark or anything like that, I just like to do this as a kind of slap to the face for some of my readers as a kind of pleasant little jalepeno pepper you didn't know was in your breakfast burrito. It stings a bit but it only makes you love it all the more, if you don't like spicy stuff just make up something up with candy or something because I'm to lazy to make up anything myself.
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It was more of a question of your current state of being but thank you for the enlightening information. I was not aware that there were any authors that did that. Though I can't say I approve of such actions it is your story and I can't in all honesty find anything wrong with you wanting to have fun.
I'm finishing up with a new chapter, it'll be out later today.
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Yay update!
hmm sounds good :P
I got a comment for ya...um
this is the worst chapter of the story I have ever read. 
but seriously, I thought the story was good.
1780513 Although it may seem good I'm not going to get where I wanted to go if I don't restart it. Thus, the deed must be done. In my mind, if I don't like it my readers won't either.
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(Because everyone loves Twist(that was sarcasm by the way, nobody likes twist))
this is a good story, I enjoy these vampire/werewolf stories about Vinyl and Octavia.
good luck with your assignments, and keep up the good work.
1783947 oh ok then. hope it's even better than before then.
first :D commence read
Not only trying to hitch a ride from a mediocre, but famous story, but also doing it the wrong way.
Dear author, why do you insult your own intelligence so?
1844183 Don't be so quick to judge dear reader, I've said it before and I'll say it again no two fics are the same and there is no rule that fanfictions have to follow the expected out come of the reader. Thought hat particular story you refer did in fact introduce me to that particular type of fic that doesn't mean I intend hitch a ride on it, there are plenty of werepony/vampony fics out there that came long before that one and there are many that will come long after that one. My story doesn't have to be limited by other's stories even if it may have a similar theme. You don't tell people they are copying someone because they wrote a Rainbow Dash fanfiction that was somewhat remotely related to another Rainbow Dash fanfiction. Think before you speak and next time only comment if you have something more productive to contribute.
1844968 Oooookay...
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squee!
squee!
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2416855 Hell no! That story I consider quite disgusting thank you very much. In case you haven't noticed the plot has absolutely nothing to do with that... fanfic. I hat the though of even the slight comparison to My Roommate is a Vampire.
-Cakesok
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that's a little harsh cus i mean most that have read the story find it to be the best supernatural and vinyl/octy fic ever written why do you hate it?
2445423 It's because it seems no one can write a vampony fic without that story being brought up. It annoys me to no end.
2465738 o i see people keep thinking that all vampire fics are inspired be the "My roommates a vampire" story, but that's not always case and most of the time it is not and because alot of people think that it can be hard for writers the get the full credit they deserve, their own blood (no pun intended), their own imagination were put in those story's and it enrages you when you see comments about how a story is a rip off are or was inspired by "My roommates a vampire" or any story for that matter when it wasn't.
I completely understand how this enrages you though i don't not agree with what you said about Dennis the Menace's story. Its not his fault and its not far to insult his hard work because of what other people are saying. How would you feel if another writer said your work was disgusting because of the same reason?
2465771 It's because the story he made had lots of potential in the beginning and he took the plot the wrong direction and drove it into the ground, that is why I don't like it. My opinion is my own and that's how it will stay.
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well i understand where you're opinion is coming from though i thought it was an amazing story with a great plot but i'll respect your opinion but i still feel it was harsh to say it was disgusting.
2481401 Maybe it was harsh but I still stand by my word.
2511712 all i needed was for you to say that :) now i can fully enjoy your fic i bet it'll great
2512265 Thank you.
I've always wanted a story that makes Vinyl albino. It gives a reason as to why she wears sunglasses all the time: albinism often results in photosensitivity, which would make her almost always need to wear sunglasses outside all the time.
The more you know!
Why is everyone's dialogue in the same paragraph? Please, you have to fix this. I decided not to read any further for now when I realised this would be a frequent occurrence.