That one fan of MLP, who makes her plot way darker and complexer then intended. And the person, who roleplays more then she writes fanfiction. *ON A WRITING HIATUS FOR NOW*
This story is a sequel to Auntie Moony
Celestia has a big surprise for her younger sister. She wants to teach her how to fly. Luna, of course, is happy and really excited. But sadly flying is not as easy as it looks like. And Luna seems to have her own special problems with it. Luckly Celestia is not the only teacher, Luna can rely on.
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Its a cute little story but you need an editor, you had a lot of grammar mistakes.
So sweet
6328300
I was lazy, when it comes to correction in this story. Ups.
So Cute
I like it the best line "nice landing smartass"
6333208
Haha, thanks. Yeah, that really is a funny line.
6328300 Agree as well. Cute story but the format was a distraction for me.
6367599
Okay. I guess, I can change the formation for the next stories. Sorry that it confused you.
6367739 Na it alright. It just need more spacing and periods. Just small fixes.
6369398
Okay.
I think you could turn these into a rather impressive series of short stories! You just need an editor
6552604
You mean I could expand on the Auntie Moony world in your opinion?
6552641
Yeah! You could make a bunch of short stories where Luna and Moony go on adventures, maybe leading up to Luna's corruption?
6553626
I was never sure if I should put the corruption into this world. It did not suited with what I have in mind for these two.....
6555420
Yeah, that makes sense. But I still think that doing a bunch of short stories between these two would be cool!
6555926
If I have an idea and the time, I might come back to these two.
6566243
That would be so cool!
6569466
I am glad, you enjoy this so much. I am still surprised if I consider Auntie Moony as my most successful story with over 50 likes. I wonder why. I mean the quality of my style is rather simple and not even complex and detailed as I usually can. Do you have any idea?
6570312 The answer to that question is Luna is best pony.
6808599
Especially as a baby.
6808688 oui
6555420
Or perhaps Moony isn't the only one of her kind...
First time I read this back in 2019. Great story I thought back then. 😊
Now it’s 2022. I still think it’s a great story. 👍
(Do you ever plan to make more?)