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Shinako-tan


Just a pegasister with a good imagination...

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When the Wonderbolts Academy holds a party for the trainees, Rainbow is excited to go! But when she also finds out Soarin' is going, she brings out her A game.

That is...until something goes wrong of course!

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Might want to proofread this and edit it.

6329915 On which parts exactly? :duck:

Awesome story sir!:raritywink:


^coolstorybrah^

she walked away, tossed her trash, and excited the hall.

She exited the hall.
There still was some few more errors but not too much.:twilightsmile:
Awesome story!:pinkiehappy: Make sequel for it. I LOVED IT!:rainbowkiss::heart:

6331328 Ahh. Ok thanks for the tip! And daww thank you! I am actually working on a sequel so stay tuned! :coolphoto:

6331238 Thanks! (Im a lady. :rainbowkiss:)

6331416 You're welcome and awesome! I'll definitely check it.:pinkiehappy:

I DIED THAT WAS SO COOL IM BAKED AS IN BAKED FIRED CHIPOTLE LOL
BTW NICE STORY
LOVE IT

All the I's need to be capitalized.

6465630 It's all good in the hood :twistnerd:

Oooooh!!:trollestia::trollestia::trollestia:How cuuteeee!!!:twilightsheepish::twilightsmile::rainbowkiss:

6505695 Thanks. I'm glad you think so! :yay:

"Soarin'....?" Rainbow whispered loud enough for them both to hear. Her voice cracked and tears suddenly swelled in her eyes.

MY HEART IS B R E A K I N G

Soarin' flared his wings and stomped his hoof, "Rainbow, I didn't kiss her! She just randomly ran up to me and literally just smacked me in the muzzle!"

Oh wait nvm

Rainbow's heart skipped a hundred beats as he stepped even more closer to her and stared into her reflective magenta eyes. She blushed as he lifted her chin but didn't kiss her. He instead tightly embraced her in his built arms. She was still in shock and didn't know what to say.

So..she died?:fluttershysad:

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