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SylveonAKASteven2Desmond
I'm back, motherbuckers! Well not to write...just to read...but who knows (Back after 2 years of losing interest and 1 year after latest story)
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From what I can tell from the description, this is three story ideas smashed into one, and yet it still stays under 5k words. I'm not sure if I should be amazed or not.
After reading all that I could stand, not much mind you, I can tell you that this story is just everywhere. I have no idea what was going on.
Ugh. I didn't enjoy it as much as I wanted too.
Cupcakes is bad, and it was never good.
Please... let it die.
Several bad, unoriginal ideas crammed into 4000 words. This story is an incoherent mess and not one thing about it works.
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I think it was amongst one of the first if not the first fic to be super gorey and feature Pinkamena, thus regardless of quality it grew very popular.
6994750 Exactly.
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For those who dislikes my story I'm very sorry if I can't contribute enough to my story.
For everyone who hates my story
http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/604465/whats-with-the-dislikes
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I laid out exactly why I disliked this story. It's three poorly thought out ideas that have been sewn ass-to-mouth together due to some horrifying experiment. You tried to play god, and it didn't work.
Secondly, it was due to the fact that Cupcakes is old hat by now. It's had millions (and millions) of unofficial sequels, and Fimfiction as a whole just doesn't need that. Granted, you tried to be creative. It was the wrong kind of creative though.
Lastly, I sincerely hope you don't take most of this too hard, and wish you the best of luck on English as a language. It's a tough one.
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Gotta disagree to an extent, because come on, just because I write about Tom Bombadil selling meth with Trixie in Midgar while avoiding the likes of Jotaro Kujo and Mike Tyson before he got brain damaged doesn't mean I have a god complex. No, I have a god complex because I really, really want to have death metal play while I ride a tidal wave of acid on towns full of sinners, criminals, and people who didn't rewind rented VHS videos.
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Holy shit you're right.
6994858 Yeah! Fuck those guys! If they weren't obsolete, I guarantee that there would be a manhunt for people who don't rewind.
6994669 Nice name.
For all who read this:
We've deduced that this fic is actually a form of psychic warfare used by our enemies to reduce the intelligence of the population.
For the sake of your intelligence and your sanity,
DO NOT READ
6995562 Also, because people WILL disregard this to see what the third crossover is: It's Plants vs. Zombies.
GAME'S OVER, KOREAN SPIES, NOW ACCEPT YOUR LOSS WITH GANGNAM STYLE AND GRACE!
6995562 You know I have to read it now...
And by God, I have not laughed out loud by myself in a long time. Your comment just made my day a bit brighter.
Of all the things that are bad here, the worst part for me was that Fimfiction decided my stories were 'similar' to this. Thanks a lot Fimfiction, I thought we were friends
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Yeah I pretty much got depressed lately in my life so I didn't pay more intention in some of the story. I just wanted this story out of my mind for a fresh new story in fanfiction. And if you hated it, just tell me what you disliked and why you disliked it so that I can improve my story. At least be like Meteor_Mirage or Eyes over Heaven (although technically Eyes over Heaven is pretty rude to me after I made this) and specifically point it out for me why and before anyone else says it sucks because it was darude sandstorm within 40000 words, I just wanted to point out that I am actually very surprised I reached 100 views so fast although the dislikes and also I am shocked to have 4K words only. So please stop hating what I comment because I suck at English and I am just a pony who came to the human world to try out myself how fan fiction works so please forgive me. This might be the last you'll ever see me again.
Until then, I shall say peace.
6997827 Dude. Most of the viewers here already said specifically why they disliked this story. It's because, in all honesty, a shitty hashed over story.
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Oh heavens
You were playing the sympathy card half well right up until that line, and yeah I probably sound callous, but god damn that was cringy
This story is.....well something.....okay I'm not gonna lie, this is just bad. This story has little to no plot, the grammar is bad and could do some work on, not to mention the idea of using cupcake is just boring, tasteless, and done to death. Look I'm trying not be dick about this but you need to think of a story that gets the readers attention, get an editor or take some English classes for your grammar, and don't make stories with multiple characters from different shows or series unless you're good at it. Also your story needs a better plot story then this.
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Edit: Does this mean you won't be taking me up on your offer in that one blog post you made?
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I'm not reading it yet. I'm kind of depressed lately. I am starting to read La vie en Rose and is that French??? and the saltwater room.
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It's probably French. Hopefully.
It came from a French song.
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Just saying, the story is updated a little bit I guess.
I felt my brain cells dying as they struggled to comprehend this mess.
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If you want to know the reason why, please just press more for Celestia's sake? You'll understand.
So this story says pinkie never killed anypony, but somepony who looked like her did?
I loved it.