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Mini Minrie


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Yes, I know she isn't blue-skinned in the cover art, but the only things I could find that even remotely resembled our 'protagonist' were all disallowed on fimfiction. Oh well.

Sex tag+Romance tag+female demon protagonist?

Break out the kinky shit!

Well, I guess it would make sense for a Demon of Torment would be a Machonist.

6163418 I'd rather kill myself.

6163281 I'll admit up front that the sex will probably be very much downplayed, as it's more about the demon's relationship and thoughts on the relationship, but it'll be there. I have one scene planned that I hope will knock some people's socks off. :raritywink:

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I'm required by site rules not to encourage that course of action. :twistnerd:

is this forcused on Clop, or can i expect more real story too?

6164200 well i admit i could have read the other comments, but i didn´t took the time, well thank you, i read it.

6166139 np. Was easier than writing out another comment.

6166305 Expecting a man to do his own dirty work. Who do you think I am?:rainbowlaugh:

I shall fix it as soon as I get home, though.

I already hope, that this point of the story, isn´t the ending too.

Well not bad, but i hope this story continues get´s past this moment.

This is getting really good, i like how this is going. I don´t know if a sequel for that story would be possible later, i mean the way that everything that happens is not in the past anymore.

However, i somehow don´t believe that she is going to be free, at least not till now. It could be Twilight but i somehow think that it has to be Luna, after she came back.

6167190 Oh, it's far from over. Chapter two is up and running and chapter three will be along whenever I finish it.

I can see Celestia doing this.

Let´s see if i got that one point right, the demon can hurt Celestia if she wants (if they are alone), but it has to be something that is more or less allowed? , or can she hurt/ torture in any way, like........well burning skin, cutt of a leg, something that can be seen by others.

Or isn´t she allowed to do ..........permanent injuries?

Did the Demon said, that she was stronger because she didn´t have to hold herself back in town?
Couldn´t Celestia just take her somewhere else, and kill her?

6169754 Nah, Celestia is by far stronger, but she's just largely unaffected by her simpler magic (i.e. how she pushed through her telekinesis) and far from worried about harming others. She doesn't care about the lives of others, so she has that 'strength' to hold above Celestia's head. Won't say any more on this, because it's important.

And for that, she can do anything that she wants, just like how Celestia can do anything she wants right back to her, short of trying killing each other (as that would technically void their contract and allow Arai free reign to hunt one of the ponies, or Celestia free reign to shove her in Tartarus).

I'm calling it! Mad Hatter!

Loving it so far; the demented, twisted and warped thought process of the demon; the riveting scenes LG bloodshed and gore; that annoying little pony's questions about her foolish princess...

Ahhhhhhhhhhh, my inner predator shall be stalking this story very, closely...

8150270 Then I guess I'll have to motivate myself to continue this. :rainbowlaugh:

Can't promise anything new anytime soon, cause I have troubles with continuing ideas when new ones are constantly popping into my head, but I'll get back to work on this asap.

8151227 I didn't even notice how long this has been sitting... Huh.

But awesome. My only complaint is, quite simply, the groups you have this in. HiE? Well that sorta fits. But clopfics and shipping? I'll admit, it is quite enjoyable, but you might want to add it to some dark groups (it'll also fit in the rape group because... Well let's face it, consensual isn't something demons are known for).

On a personal note, I know the feeling... Now I wanna go back and continue some piece of junk I hadn't even looked at in months! Oh well.

Now to look into your other works... Very, closely.

Edit: maybe not! :duck::unsuresweetie:

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