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It's not often I read a story where I feel compelled to post my feelings and opinions on it. As so far, the author's writing style is quite good and clearly expresses the main character's feelings and fears. And Mary is very afraid.
What got me to post is how...rapey the Equestrians come across as. There is no actual rape going on, and the characters are actually being flirty and fun. However, the main character is so touch-averse that the affections of the other characters have a creepy feel to them. If this is what the author intended, they did a damn good job.
The story has captivated me, mainly because of the main character's attitudes. In other stories I've read, humans transported to Equestria always seem to adjust to pastel pony world easily. Or they're more annoyed than afraid. This story is very different, and it has caught my interest.
Carry on, writer. Carry on.
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That's... kinda the point? I want them to be portrayed as much more open and giving, the ponies especially, about sex, and sexuality, while Mary is very much repressed (with others) and has her own reason as to why she's averse to it, which will come out in snippets later. Not so much rapey as much as they're used to how things are, and how most creatures on Equus act when it comes to relationships of any kind, especially of the physical variety, and Mary absolutely is not.
Hmm i like it so far. Keep up the awesome work.
Well there aren't many stories with female protagonist out there, a bit too much swearing on here. Let's see how this goes.
Holy, this girl is just so scared that it hurts to read. That is to say, i'll be waiting the next chapter.
Amazing prologue chapter. It's very thrilling to see a story try out a different take on an admittedly standard concept; in this case being the Isekai/HiE concept. I mean you see plenty of HiE stories w a male MC that has either somehow basically stumbled into Equestria or meet 'the merchant' and got displaced. This is the first one, that I've seen at least, w a female MC. This is also one of the very few HiE that doesnt take a 'just fell into' or 'was reincarnated' or 'displaced' concept to get the MC to Equestria. I'm looking forward to seeing how this story will progress.
Wow really compelling chapter and story so far. I'm glad Mary didn't just take to being somewhere that's not Earth like it was just another day and par for the course kinda thing. I feel bad for Mary but I'm actually happy she freaked out at first. Some HiE stories will have the MC come to terms w not being on Earth almost instantly; you know unless they're falling out of rhe sky bc then it would be very understandable if you were terrified lol.
Mary is such a captivating MC. I love Silk, and Ysa. However, even though I can't explain it exactly, Lulubelle has to be my favorite secondary MC. I mean how can you not love her, she's just too adorable. Not saying that Ysa and Silk aren't adorable in their own right. Though to end with who my comment began with, Mary is just the most adorkable.
I know. I know. I was just gushing and not really saying anything. Though I don't care. Sue me but you can't change the way I feel. *turns in mock indignation*
Oh how I love this story! ❤ ❤ ❤
Eagerly waiting for the next update. *pretends to look at a watch in mock impatience*
Omg why did you leave it in such a cliffhanger! I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Because I'm an awful person
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Lol no you're not... you just know how to get readers to come back for more.
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We shall see soon enough
Yay
thank you for the new chapter. I really like this story so far and I was scared that maybe you wouldn't or couldn't continue it.
I hope you can get your brain together again. Nopony like having a bad brain. I wish I could help but I only have glue and duct tape... and I don't think that'd work lol.
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Not literally a bad brain, but figuratively. Can't remember shit.
Glad you're liking though
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I know what you mean about remembering stuff. My memory is so bad that I'm just lucky if half the time I'm able to remember my name's Jon. *smacks the side of my head* I mean CJ. Lol
Nobut seriously I totally understand what you mean. And I knew you didn't literally mean a bad brain.
I just have a... unique... yeah let's go with that, a unique sense of humor.
All right I enjoyed the series and not only that I'm so happy that you bring this one species in it's actually one of my favorite species that ever lived you could say I'm somewhat a professor in the species of Kobold give me facts or knowledge mean to know about them let me know I also hold the title of the only person who has a separate hard drive dedicated of 400,000 pictures of kobolds so yeah I'm highly obsessed with them they are adorable and they should be protected.