• Published 20th May 2012
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Faded Rainbows - ChaoticHarmony



Rainbow Dash grows old.

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Epilogue: Dash of Joy

Dear Scootaloo and Wonderbolts,

Most of you know me as the great and beautiful Rainbow Dash. I'll bop Scootaloo with my wing if she didn't play me off like that! But seriously, this is my last words of encouragement to you all. I gave up most of my life to be with the Wonderbolts. So I'm the best one to give this advice to you. This is my last tip for all of you. That tip is: Don't let this take over your life. Sure, it's great and all, but real success is when you have your friends there to enjoy it with you. Don't make the mistake I made. Since this is my will though, I'll get on with what I'm leaving behind.

To the Barnyard animal I love the most, I leave my cloud-mansion, with everything in it. Try not to turn it into a coop will you Scoots?

To the team of the greatest fliers of Equestria, I leave my handbook of tricks that I have written. If you choose to accept this gift, you must help me honor the rest of Equestria with my last bequest.

To the ponies of Equestria, I leave a Sonic Rainboom in the hope that it helps them all discover beauty in the darkness that grips us all and in the hope that it guides them to good.

Now I'm sure by now that all of you are either crying or trying to look tough. I would hate to leave Equestria hangin on that Sonic Rainboom. So you go out and make me one!

Blinking away tears, Scootaloo heard the rest of the team sniffling as they each read the letter. Scootaloo still had a small smile on her face from Rainbow's nickname for her. Stomping into the middle of the locker room, she raised her voice to a shout.

"You heard her fillies! Let's give Equestria a Rainboom that they will never forget!"

Comments ( 28 )

You're getting good at these sad fics, I can't wait for the next! :yay:

616941 Next one shall be of Fluttershy! Mwhahahahahaha :fluttercry:

Nyeeeees.... Fluttershy it shall be! :fluttercry:

First, you pick on the most awsome pony, Rainbow Dash. Next the most adorable pony, Fluttershy?!
Oh... thats just cruel sir

I already did one on Pinkie Pie though :pinkiesad2: The most partytastic pony?

This was great. I didn't cry, but it was great. :pinkiehappy:

618352 Well, if you keep an eye on my profile, you will see one come for all the Mane 6, though I'm not telling the exact order of them! check out my other stories as well, the Non-tear jerking fics are feeling unloved now! :flutterrage: You will LOVE THEM! :flutterrage:

I will read this definatly later, but the description is so sad that it feels like im being force to read this. I like sad fanfics, I don't know why, but I do can't wait to see how this one turns out. :duck:

Short, sad, and to the point! Success!:raritywink:

Well done, *sniff* well---- d-done :fluttercry:

im tearing up now......so good and sad!:fluttercry::heart: great job!!!!!!

622233. You should read my other 2... Well, teres another one in the process of being submitted

618372 Oh, don't worry, ChaoHarm. I have been "keeping track" of your profile. :ajsmug:

641833 *Laughs evily* that's good to hear..... *mutters* stalkers... all of them.... :pinkiecrazy:

641851
:ajbemused:: Sir, the victim was attacked in several places by a staple gun. We believe it was one of the victim's stalker fan girls.

:rainbowdetermined2:: I guess he just... *puts on goggles*... couldn't keep it together.

:yay:: YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

This was sad, and yet it was totally Dash. Boasting even when she's dead, that's juast how awesome she is. :rainbowdetermined2:

But if you do little Fluttershy, it needs to be the most heart-breaking, tear-jerking, soul-crushing story of sadness you've ever written. So that way everyone who reads it will be like " WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!! :raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritydespair::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry:

653454 I did do a fluttershy one. Look at my stories page

Sorry, just noticed this one, don't buck my head off :fluttercry:

653511 I won't..... if you go read it :trixieshiftleft:

Oh, that's a dirty trick, fiiiiiiiiiiiiine, but you'll have to excuse me if I make another comment that should've been made behorehoof, okay?

:trollestia: Problem?

That was a nice goodbye.:rainbowdetermined2:

You know, there is a reason why not a single man dared to hit the dislike-button on this fiction.
Hitting the sad-mark just by turning time to last years of Rainbow Dash, where she didn't lose herself in fulfilling all her dreams, but still feeling guilty that she had to be away from her friends for such a long time. This really shows why Rainbow Dash is the bearer of the element of loyalty. Also, her last actions and words were just what one could expect of her.

And not only that! Style and grammar are both excellent, too! I just love it. :twilightsmile:

1835682 Hehe, thanks ^^ this is one of my older one too.

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