The King's Golden Apple
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Any good Sombra story is my type of story m/m or not
The story is not better than summary.
5938374 Please tell me what's wrong with story, instead of just saying it's not good
5938385 Formatting, word and sentence order, characterization.The countdowns, out of order explanations of stuff that does not matter, walls of text, OOC actions of ewryone, hand waving half of the back story, false tagging (there is no romance, sex, or comedy) ...
I am too lazy to point out all the stuff.
It gets better toward the end of chapter, but the beginning is just bad.
Well good luck writing anyhow.
i love you!!!
I like it, wish there was more to it
Slowest buildup I've ever seen, EVER
6327337 I'm sorry