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Twilight's Marem/Harem3,583 stories ·2,222 members

Midnight Matchmakers

Twilight and Sunset are sent around ponyville with strange riddles leading them on top of a lonely hill. Little do they know that, this is a set up by the two ponie's friend's. The only question is what for and why at midnight?

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Spider8ite

Spider8ite #1 · May 3rd, 2015 · · ·

Well I love Sunlight, but I need to say you need a editor ASAP. Also I need to ask why the cover art is your OC? If you need some coverart for that you can find one around Derpibooru, because OC's made in the Pony Creator isn't really the best of cover arts. Here a example for it:
derpicdn.net/img/2015/4/13/872848/large.jpeg
Well stay awesome lady/sir!

Your friendly fillyfooler,
Miss Spectrum

Mikey_030

Mikey_030 #2 · May 3rd, 2015 · · ·

lebowski42

lebowski42 #3 · May 3rd, 2015 · 2 · ·

Urgh. This description is awful.

Twilight and Sunset are sent around ponyville with strange riddles leading them someplace

This gets worse the more I read it. "Leading them someplace" is so lazy. Describe why i should give a shit about riddles , where they came from or why I should care where they are going.