- Member Since 15th May, 2012
- offline last seen Aug 24th, 2012
Kolective
Hey guys! I'm new around here, and I need criticism. I also have an account on ponyfictionarchive.net, so please, feel free to go check that out.
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hey iv been reading through this and i am a little confused..... hes a human in equestria or are they all human? he fell from the sky and they accepted him into their lives? sorry im a little slow today lack of sleep i geuss ZZZZzzzzz
lol cyberpony? cant say i saw that coming and yes i am the first to comment yay me lol
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All humans. And congrats. I put a shoutout on ponyfictionarchive.net for the first one to ever comment. If only I could for you.
ahh ok that makes more sense lol thanks i thought you were doing inter species there for a second oooo i would love seeing fluttershy as a human she would be so CUTE!!!!
i am also favoriting and watching lol
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Next chapter will be up in a few hours, hopefully. I'll try to post every day. I've been getting good at doing so.
what the fu...? where did he get a sword?
sexual tension!
awwww she is so sensitive but i do wish she would have acted a little different i know its hard for her but i would like to see her confirm her love soon please!
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If you read in the story, he got the two swords that Rainbow said were outside her door on her house as a family treasure. Read better. >_<
I think I know what advice 'Shy needed. :megusta:
Short,but good. I bet Blaine is happy 'Shy is scared of lightning.
i had a total strange dumb moment i looked down just ever so slightly at a dirty ball thing you know the ones you play with at a pool they suck up water well i didnt really pay much attention to what it was at first and picked up thinking it was my apple and tried to eat it..... it was nasty
aww she is so in love with him she just cant say it lol
598595 I think they're the ones that were Twilights Heirlooms, but I don't know. It was really unclear.
And when did Applejack, Pinkie Pie, and Rarity get there? I thought was just RD and Blaine till they jumped.
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Get there really helps. When? I honestly sometimes forget moments like that. xD
Where did all these items he has come from!
Also: FIRSTIES! *chews gum*
Need longer chapters.
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I know, I'm trying. It takes me like 1 1/2 hours to write the ones i do. xD
huh? sorry but im a little lost there. he stopped their fight or he stopped the lightning? oh and FIRST!
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Lol. If you know what I meant, it is that he stopped both lightning bolts at the same time. This amazed them into like, stopping or something. He should be fried. Plus what happened to the swords. (It's positively shocking!)
"She held out her hand, and a large jolt of lightning fired from it at Twilight"
"She held out her hand"
"her hand"
HAND
Hmm.......uhhhh........What? It skipped around so much I lost track!
Also FIRST!!!
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Maybe I wanted to be more creative? Maybe constantly using horn was getting old? I dunno. It just SOUNDED GOOD.
*hangs up the rage phone* Okay. I'm good. :3
ohhh looks like blaine gets to have a nice little chat with the princesses! and once again i ask i know you told me before but they are ALL humans because trixies comment threw me off last chapter about him being a mere human?
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Regular human. No magical powers (As if they were unicorns) Or wings (As if they were Pegasi)
Ahh ok thankyou i was out of it seeing as it was like almost 3 in the morning lol
Yay for flutterlove
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xD
Btw everyone, a lot of people are favouriting, but not liking. That is kinda lowering the rating. 13 - 4. About 74% likes.
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Snipesalot, post about 'Sexual tension'. Gotta say one thing. IT AIN'T HAPPENING. NO WAY IN HELL. I mean it. This isn't a clopfic. Oh, and I need Derpy in my story. xD
FFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUU! Cliffhanger and short chapter!!!!!!!!
lol Woooowwww! Way to go derpy!
Oh i wonder what the threat could be! I can not wait until the next chapter! Keep 'em coming!
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DERPY HOOVES!!! X3
Sorry about not posting a new chapter... My ear hurt extremely badly last night and I couldn't concentrate at all...
Gosh...Talk about Flutterrage!
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Exactly. xD FLUTTERAGE=WIN
I wonder where Fluttershy went.... Wait??? brownish yellow??? please dont tell me...
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Question: Don't tell you what? ._.
lol Mind blank moment? Fluttershy is yellow and you said the monster is a brownish yellow.... so yeah.....
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If only... I'm basing these off of similar things, SIMILAR. DON'T YOU COMPLAIN, JAKE AND JOSH. D8<
lol I thought of Drake and Josh.
I am worried for AJ now.....
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Lol... You should be... I'm writing it now. I need to find you on Facebook or Skype or something. xD
I use my little brothers skype. (I am too lazy to make my own.) It is KalebNoobMaster. As for facebook.... I don't go on it. I use ibrony.com.
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ibrony.com?
Ba-huh? What happened with Dashie?
Man things got serious...
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Eh, I noticed that. Taking a little change of pace soon. Not so constant fighting. xD