• Member Since 14th May, 2012
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Coat Rack


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This is a story about a pony known as Freezor Relic “Frostbite”’s life, from the good times to the bad times.With the help of the mane six, he will learn how to overcome the hard times in his life, and enjoy the good times. The story will have some grimdark and sad parts in it, as shown above, but I hope you enjoy it!

-Coat Rack

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 18 )

hmm feels weird cybernetics are in ponyville but stil liked and thumb up keep writing

Um... Coat, you're switching was and were around again. Do I need to editor your stuff again?

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If you want to be, since you know how much I fail from the last fic we did. :P

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Not so much I know you suck, as I know what mistakes you always make.

lol sir have you watched some witchcraft is magic?

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I only watched some episodes last night to get a better idea on how one of the characters acted, the rest was just me bumping into it while browsing pony stuff.

meh stil awsome story keep writing.

Spoiler alert:
The new pony at the end of Chapter 3 is the blue one in my avatar. Coat Rack and I worked together before (see: the only story I have uploaded), and now I'm helping him as an editor and rewriting her lines to match the personality I designed her to have.

Small note of clarification: Crystal does not have amnesia or anything like that. She's 25 in the present of this fic, and the flashbacks at the start of Chapter 3 and 4 were when she was 5. For reasons related to the incident with her mother, she left Cloudsdale at age 6 with her father and little brother, both of whom have a very high chance of not showing up in this fic.

So yeah, she just doesn't remember these things for having not thought about them for almost 20 years.

Heh, I guess that filly from the past as soon as I saw the letters "Ga"... This will be quite interesting. And I never thought you would take up fanfiction writing again, Chaos Knux...

ooh cyborg pony off doing manual labors

DUN DUN DUUUN! This is very in-depth to your character's back-story. However there are some "human" errors. (Person, Hand) I would suggest using the Find tool and search for these little devils.

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Technically, that's what you and I do every night on IRC, Streak210.:trollestia:

Sorry about the lack of updates guys, I've been REALLY busy lately. I have a project I need done before the end of the month, and I am going to be busy later this month. I may try to squeeze in some time to work on this though, although I am planning on going back through and fixing some mistakes that slipped by.

Anyways, thanks for all the comments! :pinkiehappy:

“A while back you mentioned you mentioned somepony called ‘Frosty’ dropped by your shop, right?”

Only error I found...

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH LOOOOOORD Pinkie Smack the wall

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