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HOLY SHIT Spike got some from Rarity. I do got to give him credit he is perhaps Raritys perfect getile colt. I say that because she was in a bad place and Spike did not let his needs get to him instead he tried to comfort her. Few guys do this and trust me when shes on you its hard to stay clam. But he failed but still some from Rarity good for him.
Oh and
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Rarity... now i kinda feel sorry for Spike. Finally having his dream come true, but not in the way he wanted.
Yay, first! Anyway. That's messed up. Spike's been traumatized. Rarity should be ashamed. Loved the ending.
EDIT: Nevermind.
Well I just lost all sympathy for Rarity after she raped a child. I love the way this story doesn't ignore or pull back on the sticky issues.
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but all i can give you is this
Wow this is getting involved now. Keep it up!![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
Everything about this story is just terrific, although the lack of Appledash in this chapter is dissapointing.
damn rarity....
Bad ass Chapter /)(\![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
Awesome you write the best stories.. such heartbreak and and![:pinkiesad2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiesad2.png)
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But its well writtenand a joy to read in a sad story sort of way
This is starting to become conflicting... Hope it ends as twirarity, though.
freakin awesome storyline. can't wait to see more.![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
honestly this just hit the fan big time poor .....well EVERYONE
oh god...I don't know how much more of this I can take...this started out awesome but...you're taking it not only into one, but like fifty love triangles...there's just waaaaaaay too much drama going on in each chapter and not enough fluff and good things going on to counteract it. though these Princest endings make me keep wanting to read...
Well umm... Rarity just raped Spike on Twilight's couch... Okay...
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I walked into that one didn't I.
Thank you for the mental imagery and nightmares to come.
Oh... please post more soon! normally i just lurk and never comment so my compliments to you for getting me so into a story to make me break my normal habits. please please please!![:fluttercry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttercry.png)
Twirity is my favorite ship i hope they end up together i couldn't bare to see them end up appart
GOOD CHAPTER :D!!
YES! Great Chapter!
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i gotta agree completely. even with your second post boasting about being the first post
i can still be sympathetic for Rarity. she lost so much in so little time. though what she did to Spike is kinda off putting to say the least, i can clearly see she wasnt in her right stat of mind. as long as Rare dont continue with a "revenge plain" that is. for Spikes age, i like to think hes in his teen like 14 or so. i mean we clearly see he had very mature fantasy befor all this right? he's also clearly old enough to "do the deed". just saying that in this fic i see him being young (still a child) but still much older than the show.
can't wait to see how this resolves itself
img.ponibooru.org/_images/6625a1be413b040c86dc426949e4517d/7600%20-%20i_came%20meme%20spike.jpg i had to![:moustache:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/moustache.png)
I was really proud of Spile for doing the right thing and not taking advantage of rarity, but then rape happened. This story is awesome.
Wow..... Yep things are headed for a big ol' blow up. The damage from this is gonna impact a lot of friendships. Oh boy.![:facehoof:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/facehoof.png)
SPIKE!!!!![:trollestia:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trollestia.png)
Me like..![:moustache:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/moustache.png)
Oh dear lord... nonconsensual sparity
724630 I think he is 14 or so in the show just thats baby for dragons. Twilight was like five or so when he was born but now their like 17, 18, 19 so yeah. But then agian Spike is a dragon and the rules for them is they have no rules some grow with greed others with love idk.
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I just had to when i saw your comment.
I want to have revenge on Twilight.![:raritystarry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritystarry.png)
*Raperity out of the blue*.![:fluttercry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttercry.png)
I just wish Spike would understand what happened and run crying to her Momma Twilight. I wanna see Twi DESTROY Rarity for this. This story is getting darker by the minute and I´m loving and tolerating every single second of it. And I want MOAR!![:flutterrage:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/flutterrage.png)
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i can dig it ![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
like Ruby said 'to each their own'. as far as i know the show never talked about the age of anypony. i personally cant see him too much older than the CMC in the show. i even think he was hitting on Sweetie Belle in one episode. idk about the no rule age thing. i like to think that was more of a wingless dragon thing or a "Spike" thing sense we dont even know if there are more wingless dragons like spike. maybe hes unintentionally keeping himself young so he doesnt become a burden for Twilight? we just gotta believe whatever til the show clears it up which i dont believe it ever will. i think the show being unclear is helping fic be made so
*Spike gave pause to the words that he just uttered. after a moment he relived that these words he himself said was truly and utterly i3.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/000/293/715/e99.jpg
If I counted right than:
1. Rainbow Dash lost her virginity back in the flying school.
2. Applejack lost her virginity by Rainbow Dash even I'm not sure how
3. Fluttershy lost her virginity by Pinki Pie when she pulled a dildo into her vagina
4. Pinkie Pie notsure but I doubt she would be still virgin
Anyway I can't wait to read more.
I wonder if Twilight Sparkle and Big Machintosh going to making love later and will they protect aganist pregnancy or not and if yes than how.
... OH MY CELESTIA!!!!
I can't believe that just happened! The writer of they series is extremely talented to have been bake to throw this many twists in this fast. I am absolutely astounded at the calibre of literary skill in this story. Props to you good sir![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
Rarity dun goof'd and she knows it![:raritydespair:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritydespair.png)
I do't give a crap what happens to Rarity in tjis story now. Raping a minor?!![:raritydespair:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritydespair.png)
Welp, I've gone from rooting for Raritwi to rooting for TwiMac. Rarity in this story lost all sorts of respect from me.
Besides, I love TwiMac.
please tell me rairity and twilight make up
dash and applejack please get back togeather ![:raritydespair:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritydespair.png)
Oh. My. Gosh.
OMG Rarity omg. I had not expected that to happen. That just blew this story out of the water. I need the next chapter soon. Poor Spike finally getting Rarity but nothing like the way he wanted.
So... we have Rape-ity. Not sure how I feel about this.![:raritydespair:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritydespair.png)
"Here is what happened between the time Spike returned to the library" Big no-no. Sounds too much like you're breaking the fourth wall, and not keeping the proper narrative. "Spike arrived at the library after dropping Ruby off at the inn. There was no greeting from Twilight, a sign that she might still be on her date with Big Macintosh." or something like that. This way it doesn't feel like we're getting a "note from the author" in the middle of the story.
Twilight you foal. You take a love-trip with Rarity --- and then shaft the poor mare by taking Big-Mac on a date. To me, Rarity's assault on Spike isn't Rarity's fault alone: Twilight shares the blame --- for letting her short sightedness and foolish dreams of Big-Mac cloud her judgment --- pushing Rarity over the edge.
Whilst I'm still hoping that Twilight and Rarity end up together, I do have one really rather worrying thought running through my head right now.... Rarity just raped Spike. Regardless of his enjoyment of it, that's what just happened. Now, Twilight loves that little Dragon like a little brother or even (maybe, though I hope I'm wrong) like a son.... If Twilight finds out what Rarity did to him, anypony within fifty metres is likely to be 'vaporized' by the Element of Magic's resulting fury....![:twilightoops:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightoops.png)
725663 hahhhahha this is own's
726077 I can live with that.
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I concur with you. But everybody jumps quickly on the "Oh noes, Rarity's a complete monster!"
Rarity did something truly perfidious. But she needs help.
Twilight, on the other hand... I'd slap her silly.
Whilst I agree that Twilight handled the situation very poorly, she is still unaware of Rarity's new feelings for her.
I'm not judging either of them, I'm just saying that Twilight'll go all 'Element of Magic' rage on Rarity if she finds out what happened. ![:twilightoops:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightoops.png)
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Twilight did not know Rarity was in love with her. For all we know, Twilight had always had a crush on Big Mac. Just because she fooled with Rarity, doesn't mean that she exactly lovd her.
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It still doesn't account for her treatment to a friend in the library.
But hey, that's how you spice these stories,
I just hope there's not an excessive shitstorm![:twilightoops:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightoops.png)
731986 I know, I was referring to her behaviour as a whole.
And you and me both, though I fear it's likely if Twilight finds out what happened.....![:fluttercry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttercry.png)
Well Twilight mentiioned to Rarity before they just started to getting together that she might be bisexual and Rarity is her fillylove and Big Mac is her colt love.
Well I'm sure big Mac would be so confused if Twilight would tell that to him too.
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read the last chapter ^_^ he got some
WHY RARITY![:pinkiegasp:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiegasp.png)
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