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you got my hopes up with zecora......... i was all like but then i was like when she didn't do anything.
but it doesn't really matter.
great chapter btw and more Flutterpie!!
Very good. I liked how everypony is really looking inside themselves to know who they truly are.
And LUNA, Good for you
i should make a fake account just to give this story another thumbs up
Damn it. I was going to do a story about parents and now I have real competition.
1pm ore up loyal dash abusing her friends trusts again.
"... she brought Rainbow Dash’s head back up to her own and kissed him feverishly." The truth comes out.
"She’d just have to talk to Princess Celestia the next time she saw her."
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643869 NO! Fixed it. Thanks.
kinda irked at Dash lieing, I don't think she would, but let's see how you handle it...as for Luna and Celestia...I honestly don't know what to say to that...a quote from a different fanfic I read involving lots of alcohol comes to mind.
"But Tia! not since the creating of ponykind!"
It's getting harder to empathize the scenes. For example: the scene when Pinkie Pie tries to make Fluttershy talk about her problem was a little too fast. First she sobs, then suddenly goes all like "okay, let me explain" without any explanation how she was/felt right at that very second. Like she just dropped the sadness in a second and went all serious with a rather detailed story.
It's all about the ardor, man.
Besides that, I KNEW my sense didn't lie when I mentioned the cracks in each relationship Good chapter as always, and for Luna's sake KEEP IT UP!
What kind of game is this, Rainbow Dash?
Let's hope it doesn't hurt too much...
I refuse to believe RD won't start feeling something after a while. She may not want the commitment part right now but when push comes to shove she'll want nothing more than to be with AJ. Loving this whole story.
A tiny bit rushed feeling compared to the other chapters, but I still enjoyed it a lot.
And as a big princest fan, I hope Luna succeeds, not just for the sex, but two immortals falling in love? Soo cuutee
As for the Pinkie scene, it did feel a bit odd, I personally would have gone with "They liked the party- but it didn't make them happy."
So she didn't outright lie, but withheld and modified it when she told it to the CMC. Like they liked that she tried, but it didn't change life on the farm for Pinkie.
Anyway, I'm liking where this is going, a lot of testing relationships and exploring ways relationships can get started. Poor AJ when she finds out though. Poor AJ.
Well I have the big confrontation will be soon here and I's possibe the CMC will learn other thing like they would like to know like maybe Spike will tell to Rarity that her big sister is dating with Twilight once those tell him.
I wonder what RD use to rip Applejack's himen and take her virgin.
I hope Rainbow Dash falls in love with Applejack. I really do because that would be a crushing blow on there friend ship. I'm sure she will start feeling bad soon enough. Love how Rarity wants Twilight so much. Hope they start dating. Ruby has to win Spike so he won't be so heart broken when he finds out about them being together. The Pinkie/Flutter part was sad, glad they were able to talk about the problem. Really liked this chapter! Looking forward to the next one.
Pinkie? Can I borrow your whip? I need to punish Rainbow Dadh for lying.
POOR RUBY!!
I'm not going to lie, I am kinda peeved about RD lying to AJ like that, and although drama can be good for the plot (no inuendo intended), I REALLY don't want this to turn into a tragedy, and what I can gather from the comments no one else is too fond of the idea either. But here's hoping that she will finally make the commitment!
P.S The Pinkieshy is really coming together i think.
dash please tell me you reconsider
This is...so AWESOME!
AWWW YEAH! ANOTHER CHAPTER!
I like..
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No. No it wont.
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Well I always wanted Spike and Rarity but looks like that wont happen. So plan B Spike hooks up with Ruby and a year later they grow teenager big and she pops out like a million eggs because Spike wont stop FU*K!NG HER BRAINS OUT!
Needs new chapter.
645249 I fear to scar some people if I say in the comments. Just search it. And yes, robots wag is best swag
My brain!!!
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So, everypony has issues because of bad parenting? Either you are being unoriginal or purposefully going for Shakespearian symmetry.
the part with Apple Jack and Rainbow Dash reminded me of the song Paradise by the Dashboard Lights by Meatloaf
only hopefully it wont end like the song does
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My thoughts exactly. Added bonus being that bad parenting seem to be on the male side in all the cases.
Freaked me out enough to start my PC and write the comment (I was reading it on my reader).
Twilight seemed ok-ish (interesting theme, mostly avoided, even if it felt out of place), Flutershy seems more appropriate, but combined with Twi made me raise a brow, and Pinkie was one too much. Plus, everything points to Rarity being through the same stuff, RD with the same symptoms probably has the same problem, and AJ just doesn't have parents.
I do hope, that reading forward my suspicions will be proven false, but, as I said, 3 out of 6 is already too much.
I am liking how everypony has some sort of problem from the ponies that raised them. Whether it be not knowing them, being abused, or whatever else there will be. I love this story and I look forward to reading more of it.
facepalms I don't think that's really a term...
Is it a lie though?
She rhymes but I've never seen someone assume Zecora speaks on the third person. Actually that's Trixie's MO