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I'll be damned if the update rate alone doesn't keep me interested.
603523 Well, I've caught up to what I've written so far, so I'm not sure if I'll be updating as frequently.
But don't worry! I won't abandon the story either.
Why do I get that bad feeling that the AppleDash isn't going to work out?
PLEASE POST MORE! I NEED CLOSURE! Hahaha. I'am just impatient. Really loving this story so far Hopping for some Rarity x Twi shipping to continue and for something to go on with spike. The Flutterpie is a pretty natural ship as well as AppleDash.
For the love of Luna let dragons be clairvoyant!
Seriously I'm like one of 5 people who actually bothers with 3 ways in their fics (albeit its not posted yet but still). Come over to the awesome side, we have pie.
Seriously my hopes just went through the roof. Not gonna lie im drooling jsut a bit and I feel giddy as a school filly about the prospect
Poor Twilight having trobule to accept that she is bisexual but she don't want to force her feelings on Rarity either.
am I the only one who had a real problem with Dash's choice of meal? I mean, veal, really? I know that earth horses are technicially omnivores, though not predatory, but a) FiM explicitly draws out that ponies are vegetarians, and even more importantly b) veal is young cow, cows also having been explicitly established as talking, thinking sentient beings. Applejack would have reacted to the thought of RD eating veal the same as if RD wanted to eat Applebloom.
I think I get what you were trying to go for, that RD has a more 'adventurous' palette, but, if that is the case, why not just have Rainbow order some fish,or escargot? Same banter effect, without the squick-factor of Dash being a baby eating monster.
605403 To be honest, I completely forgot about that...
If you want a comparison, it's like people in other countries eating dogs, whereas in America that would be considered disgusting. I think that explains it well enough. If anypony should be blamed for that, it should be the inn for serving such a dish.
In fact, I'm going to have Applejack get the inn written up for it, if that makes you feel better. Thanks for the feedback.
As far as the vegetarian thing, I don't remember it ever being explicitly stated in the show. Perhaps you can tell me where that information is coming from? If it's Word of God then I'll consider it canon, but that means I didn't know about it when I wrote it. Sorry about that!
EDIT: Changed it to fish. You were right, of course. The veal thing went too far and I didn't realize it. Thanks again!
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it's outright stated in 'over a barrel' by pinkie pie during her song segment, and throughout the rest of the show, the only animal products shown being consumed are milk and eggs (though there is a small segment in one episode where Fluttershy is shown feeding some fish to a pack of ferrets)
What started out as a regular clopfic is now something more. much more.
Blonde and brown...
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Then Rainbow Dash was born!
This is probably one of the best stories I have ever read! Can't wait for more!
The only thing i can think of in terms of construcive critism because this is such a well wrritten and well thought out story is when it comes to talking for example,
.Oh, well…thanks. And I know you well enough to know that you’re never late, so I guess I can let this slide.” RD
“You ‘guess’?” AJ
“Maybe you find a way to make it up to me later.” Applejack chuckled. right here is where u goofed and i saw it a few times it makes it seem like AJ is saying that RD will make it up to her..... im not perfect and i know your not but i have read enough books to see the mistake. and i thought i would let u know
“On the first date? Really, RD? Ain’t that a bit forward?”
im sorry if im wrong
Explaining the waiter as a pegasus by using brackets was not very impressive. You could have just written "the pegasus waiter" instead.
Otherwise, great chapter as always, loved the scene with Twilight and Rarity since it contained SO much tension and possibilities for future plot (heh, perv...)
606336 Hay, how'd you get that picture! I thought nopony was watching when that happened!
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If we want to get into what that guy said about veal, though... Applejack keeps sentient, speaking sheep as slaves. Presumably for wool, possibly for meat as well.
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Applejack keeping sheep as slaves?
I really don't get that interpretation.
I get more of a mutual convenience vibe with that.
Plus, Applejack would pay them for the wool, if it wasn't some sort of arrangement. Applejack would not keep slaves. It's just too OOC.
Mother of god... I was going to pass up on this fic, because my first impression was that it was just another crappy, badly written clopfic where each scene is more ridiculous than the last. I mean from the description, the title and chapter names, that was my conclusion.
I AM SO GLAD I decided to skim over the first chapter before dismissing it. So well written. The characters, the jokes, the plot. This is an excellent and really interesting story. Jeez, it's so refreshing to read a Slice of Life Romance after all the long adventure and grimdark fics I've read lately. This story is already in my top 10 of all time and I'm only on chapter six. I really, really hope the quality of the next 20ish chapters is the same because it's been just perfect so far. Thank you for writing!
Oh also, unless they embark on some epic adventure/some evil monster comes to kill them in the next 20ish chapters, you should add a Slice of Life tag.
you only changed half - in the goodbye scene its still veal. 605461
1362608 Fixed. Thank you.
the best clopfic continues, don't worry if you don't see me in the fave list, I only fave when I finish, 'cause I don't want to have things in my fave folder, i keep everything unread in read later (this is amazing, yet again)
606336 Oh my god dude you are a genuis i never realized it compared to thme
That was quite the enjoyable chapter. I predict some rather enjoyable moments in the future.
606336 exactly what I was thinking
its romance with SCIENCE!
Needs more clop.
Rainbow eats fish? Suddenly this fic makes no fucking sense. What did you put that in for?
No offense, but why did Applejack and Rainbow Dash kiss in the end. It seem they argued too much, fight too much and just did not have a good time to suggest that the only thing to happen is they break up. Did I miss something for it felt a little too out of nowhere with a makeup and slowly improving evening as they argue less and start to get to know each other. Just a thought.
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It works off the "Since RD hung out with Gilda, she'd of gotten influenced to eat meat at some point, and over time she would've gotten used to or even liked it." Theory.
I like seeing my daughter as a dominatrix
Kinda contrasts with the whole laughter and stuff
(Yes I do consider Pinkie my baby, sue me)
2 minutes. 120 seconds. Is that abysmal?
Omnivorous
I'm certainly breathing easy
You keep telling yourself that