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Atta girl, Luna! Never give up!
great chapter!
Incest is wincest
The Cutie Mark Crusaders don't know what they're getting themselves into
Love this story I can't wait to see more
Daaaaangg. Amazing, once again.
Lol, CMCs really aren't trying hard enough. I eagerly await the next chapter!
The awkwardness of Luna's situation is almost too much to comprehend. I just wonder how far Luna is willing to go. I'm thinking either a waking dream or some type of shape shifting and seduction approach.
One I hate you a bit. Not really. just for effect. I don't think Twilights father would be a a$$hole like that but I understand why you did it. Have to move the story forward somehow.
Two I guess if Spike does not feel the same he should not lead her on. Im a big Spike Rarity fan but i can say without a doupt that Spike, maybe not the best way, but he told her stright forword and is not leading her on. Like some mares I know and I don't mean Ponines. "Women be crazy"
And last I LIKE IT had some trouble and some Spike over all I like it. I am wishing for a happy ending due. Its just my nature.
Is that a reference to a Linkin Park song I spotted?
If not: that came eerily close.
If it is: wub woo!
Very nice job with this fic in any event. The title would suggest it's nothing more than a clopfic, which I have no problem with personally (if executed well), but... yeah, everybody already knows by now what it's really all about. And for that, have a mouspike!
HAHAHAHA AT THE LUNA/CELESTIA SIDE STORY! I hope Spike/Ruby works out. Im getting a bit bored with Pinkieshy. I just dont really like that pairing. Rarilight is going okay and so is appledash. Keep it coming. An amazing fic!
638448 There will be an explanation for that. I hated doing it, too, but I needed PLOT DEVELOPMENT!
638495 There will be progression in the Pinkieshy ship, don't worry. In fact, I'll explore that a lot further next chapter!
“Depressed about what, hon’?” Applejack asked.
“About myself and my own self-esteem, I suppose,” Twilight said.
“That’s terrible, Twilight. I hope ya get better soon.”
“Thanks, Applejack,” Twilight said.
...
...
...
Not exactly the kind of conversation I'd have with someone when discussing their depression, but I suppose I shouldn't complain. I still enjoyed that part with them all talking.
"Erm…okay, Applejack said, not sure whether that should’ve been taken as a compliment.”" There's a random set of quotation marks at the end of that sentence. Just thought I'd point it out.
Also, Luna!
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Forever aluna.
Sorry for the long comment, everypony!
YAY!
Looking forward to seeing Luna get her way. Since Ruby acts nothing like the rest of the dragons she will most likely fit right in with the ponies. Felt sad for Twilight but glad she was able to get that off her chest. Nice chapter, eagerly awaiting the next one!
lol wut
first of all ....poor luna second why ruby/spike no work if they don't end up dating cooper I will stab you with a rusty spoon.
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Haha! Princest!
God damnit Spike just have sex with ruby and get it over with!
Also no Pinkieshy?!?
still a good chapter though, good job
638631 Deleted that extra quote. Thanks!
Everyone chant with me. LUNA! LUNA! LUNA!
They really need a Luna emoticon.
with every single chapter i get more and more odd stares at my random giggling noises...probably shouldn't be reading this in school...now I'm sad there's not another chapter to read
639831 Ha. You too?
639568 No problem. Glad I could help in some small way.
It’s a voice in the back of my head.
points out all my mistakes to me, laughs every time I fall. It watches everything and awakes especially when I close my eyes
all i could think of was linkin park papercut when i was reading these parts 0.0
great chapter btw too :D
Damn, after that reading session instead of revising Undergrad Electrodynamics, I feel rather good, can't wait for the next chapter
Oh good lordy, this is gonna be SOOOO good I can't even believe it
However, I must point out that I'm seeing some changes in the dialogues. It's a little too obvious saying that you are a man of advances words when writing, but... piece by piece I can see the words are floating into what the characters say. My point is that sometimes the characters use words that I simply can't imagine they'd use (that is unless you WANT them to use those kind of words). I'm sorry to say that I'm way too tired to come up with examples, but next time I'll keep an open eye.
In short terms: awesome chapter as always and keep it up
640680 Yeah, I've noticed it, too, especially in this chapter. I'll try to correct it for later chapters. Thanks!
I can't wait 'till the next chapter!
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then il take that rusty spoon and make cupcakes
>.> But you better make that relationship work
That is a threat
Needs moar pinkieshy
Luna Come on,Tia!
Celestia:No.
Luna:Come on! I incest
exactly what I was thinking when I read the last few words
643874 Remember that incest is wincest (what does incest mean?)
Also, I have a random gif:
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ROBOSWAG IS BEST SWAG
Oh, Lulu, you conniving devil you!
“Good luck, Spike,” Ruby said. “I hope Rarity is all over you when you get back!”
“Thanks,” Spike said with a chuckle.
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Also it seems like incest is the only actual way to have any kind of relationship, seems like it would be kinda difficult if each of your lovers (if they even had any) kept dying at a ridiculous rate.
638448
We know absolutely nothing about Twilight's father other than he signed up Twilight for a school of the highest prestige before she was even ready for it, she was barely turning book pages. No one even asked her, according to her. His son also dreamed, from a young age, of joining the Royal Guard.
Now, to me, that's plenty justification for having that "Angry Asian Father" level of emotionally-abusive "builds character" "drive to succeed" type of fatherhood figure. They got a push from somewhere, so there's no reason it had to be a gentle one. Most peoples' home lives aren't fine and dandy.
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I am really starting to like stories that delve into the psychological aspects of life. CMC are going to feel the wrath of Pinkie for breaking their promise and Luna is AWESOME!
This is a good fic, buuuut.....I dunno some parts seem a little rushed through, especially in this chapter with Twilight's issue with her dad. I dunno, I guess I was wanting it to be fleshed out more, it just seemed kinda clunky to me. My only real gripe thus far.
Now begins the princest.
Good, I buckin' love Princest.
Wow, I haven't listened to Linkin Park in ages. But it seems weird to cast Night Light as even an inadvertently abusive father. I guess I'll roll with it, but that whole conversation felt too... perfunctory.
Boss, you're one of a kind. But maybe you should just be honest with Sunbutt?
After the first two sentences, I was upwards of 90% sure that this was a reference, if not outright quote of a song, so I looked it up. I had to swap out "face" for "voice," but then I discovered I was right. Then I read the third sentence, and felt a stopping so soon. Anyways, I've had Papercut playing in my head since that point. But I like the song, so I don't mind.