• Published 8th Apr 2015
  • 17,217 Views, 133 Comments

At Their Mercy - Harms Way



You have been caught by the Dazzlings. After your little supper with them, the time has come for you to finally fall under their spell.

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Comments ( 59 )

Win-win for him XD

5839027 Thank you for the compliment. I hope you enjoyed the rest of the story.

this was actually a pretty good story good job

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Thank you for the compliments. :pinkiehappy:

This story and it's prequel were awesome, I hope you'll work on a third installment :twilightsmile:

I would love to see more. I wanna see how far this goes.

A third installment would be great. There should be one where the character is like maud in a sense where they just shown indifference to anything that the Dazzlings do. Kinda monotone front like a great poker face ut has different thoughts on the inside.:moustache:

I. LOVED. IT. MUST. HAVE. MORE.

MrB

5861239 sequel, sequel:pinkiehappy:

Weeeell, we got a man down to the dark side...

My Reaction

I suppose one more sequel couldn't hurt... :raritywink: Because this kicked ASS!

Author's Note:
Thank you all for the success this story and the prequel has had. I never even imagined that these stories would even get half of this many likes and views. This story managed to get onto the Feature box for roughly 25 minutes back on April 10th. That literally made me smile to see it on there. Let me know in the comments if you guys want a third installment of the series.
- Harms Way


HELL FUCKING YEAH I WANT A THIRD PART!!!:pinkiehappy: Great job on this.

Love the story. I'd love a sequel.

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Thank you all for the compliments. :pinkiehappy:

This was amazing.

MrB

5862857 your welcome

MrB

5862857 can you get sunset involved in some way

I liked it. I rarely read stories with absolute subjugation such as this, but I thought you pulled it off well with the length that it was.

:D I like this. Good job! :3 Threequel definitely!

Okay, WHO is humping the dislike button on these comments!? Gad Demmet. >_>

5863202 Hmm... I could try to get her involved in the next story.

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Thank you for the nice compliments.

5862857 How about this one?

Tyreese Sees Beth

Tyreese- Anon

Governor- Adagio Dazzle

Martin- Aria Blaze

Lizzie and Mika- Sonata Dusk

Beth- Sunset Shimmer

Bob- Me

Dude, I had my fair share of clops, but this is one caught me for the story... And though the clop was amazing, I... Well, I was more focused on the story...

And it only means one thing:

MAKE! A! SEQUEL!... And probably one about him and the sirens after the Battle of the Bands...

Due to popular demand, I'm proud to announce a third story to this series will be made! The ETA for it is unknown at this time due to work and personal issues. However, I will do my best to make it as good, if not better than this and Hunted.

I want to thank each and every one of ya'll who have shown this series the support and love that even I didn't expect it to receive. Ya'll surprised me on how much this series has been successful. It truly makes me happy each time I come home from work to see these supportive comments.

Thank you all so much! :twilightsmile:

5871284 I agree. A story post RR would question his loyalty to them...

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For me, its a tie between Adagio and Sonata

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Hmm... to be honest, I'm not sure. The reason as to why I'm revising Hunted was because I saw tons of potential on how the story could have gone. Plus, it gave me a chance to fill in some "cracks" as some pointed out.

Thank you all so much for making this my second story to break the 200-like marker! :pinkiehappy:

i only have one thing to say after reading this for my second time...
(In TeamFour Star Vegeta's Voice)
Best...Choice...Of...My...Life!

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Glad to see that you like it, my friend! :raritywink:

there's only reaction for this clopfic

Best...ending...ever!!!:pinkiehappy::heart::rainbowlaugh:.

I've read this sort of formula and excessively vocal Anon too much already.

This was great! love anything with the dazzlings.

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I am your twin brother from alternate universe!

Well, seems like just mostly foreplay to me; but who cares? Nice read, and hope to see another sequel. :D

Oh noez! I am a slave! What ever shall I do!?

*Rest of the movie happens*

Oh.

That is the happiest slave alive. :rainbowderp:

Most excellent.

Well, if you're going to be put under a spell, this is best way to do it!

Good stuff! Any chance you'll write revised versions for these chapters as you did for Hunted?

Well, this was awesome. I'm glad there is actually a happy ending! I was worried once they got his energy it'd be "and then anon was a mindless sex slave until the end of Rainbow Rocks, the end"

Great job, enjoyed myself! :twilightsmile:

6375858 and they starved to death... Yep XD

I would do anything to kill these hoes after this! :pinkiecrazy:

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