After returning from a visit to the human world, Princess Twilight gets a visit from her older brother and somepony else. Written for FlashLight Week 2020 Day 4
5624569 I'm just good at spotting things like this....
I've been on here for just over a year, at home I've got nothing to do but read and write and write and read So I have a bit of practice (if you can call it that)
I think there may be a typo here.
Just so you know
5624234 Thanks Miss Duckling I'll fix that right now.
TWILIGHT IS BEST PONY! - Discorded Bass
5624520 There also one near the end when Flash and Twilight are saying goodbye to each other...
But your welcome
5624548 You must be one Grammar Queen (Thanks)
TWILIGHT IS BEST PONY! - Discorded Bass
5624569 I'm just good at spotting things like this....
I've been on here for just over a year, at home I've got nothing to do but read and write and write and read So I have a bit of practice (if you can call it that)
5624598 Oh make sense and I'm looking for in editor and you seem like a good one may you edit my future stories/story?
TWILIGHT IS BEST PONY! - Discorded Bass
5624654 I can read and comment, even though I've been here a year, I only know how to edit my own stories
So I'll try
ps your last reply has a typo
5624662 Alright I'll message you when I'm done my Story.
PS Kinda.....
TWILIGHT IS BEST PONY! - Discorded Bass
Awesome fic! Shining Stalker, er, Armour sure got crazy!