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A story lightly inspired by Rudyard Kipling's famous poem.

Swordsong, a private in the Royal Guard, witnesses a dark start to her career, as one of her idols faces his doom, and questions her part in the guard.

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this qualifies for a Review at Gunpoint, will be reviewed later today by myself or the group owner, Snake Plissken

5648216 to be reviewed by Snake Plissken
[EDIT] for a play on a famous poem, this is pretty damn good, it is well written, only found a few mistakes which can be corrected, those being instead of using periods, use comma's (,) I pass this story as well written

well written, only a few easy to fix mistakes, good job my friend

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