I grew up watching 3rd generation ponies and loved it! A few years later I gained a sense of style and great personality... Also know as " Then came along... MLP FRIENSHIP IS MAGIC!! Official brony!!!
Ellah Sketch is an orphaned pony. She is off to Ponyville to fulfill her dreams as an outsider artist. Although, it won't be easy considering her emotional eyes. Yes, her eye colors change with her emotions, but this unicorn plans to get through life with her Phoenix, Golden Sparks by her side.
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Well dayum, that was fast. I guess you could say she got, Puts on sunglasses, the dark meat. YEAAAAA!!!!
http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/KaleidoscopeEyes
"People rarely stop and think about how a fully functional "Mood Ring Eyes" would negatively impact the possessor's lives. She would never be able to lie about her feelings or secrets. Any crush, any secret resentment, any boredom during somebody's story, would instantly and undeniably be aired."
"A common trait of a Mary Sue."
Also not a good sign. Self-inserts -- especially ones with exotic pets and unusual physical traits (such as eyes that change color) -- are usually stories with excessive wish-fulfillment, which also tends to lead to a Mary Sue protagonist. (Also, while it's somewhat counter-intuitive, the proper spelling is "phoenix".)
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Just to let you know, I just thought of the eyes on my own. I didn't type that because I read it somewhere else and thought it was cool. Also, I meant for the whole crushes and boredom thing to happen in the story anyway.
I'm also a new fan-fic writer on the internet right now and didn't mean anything when I put put myself in the story. Plus, tons of others do that too.
With the whole phoenix thing, Golden Sparks is actually my boyfriend's OC pony (who is a pegasus). I didn't want to put him in the story because he would interfere later on.
I know this sounds as if I'm smarting off to you, but I'm not trying to. I just thought I'd clear up a few miss understandings, but thank you for helping! You made me realize that I should think more about what I write.
Ellah Sketch
5583189 omg r u every ware!!!!!! U just correct and correct people's little mistakes and then try to look good but u don't
I bet that you can't read this comment mr' grammar
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This isn't about me trying to look good, you poor, deluded child. This is about trying to make other writers better.
See the difference? If not, I'll try to explain in simpler words for your benefit.
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Ohhhh!!!!! Burn!!!