Sweetie Belle P.O.V
Sweetie Belle is feeling quite down and doesn't know what to do. The next morning she finds a strange stallion wandering the streets looking hopelessly lost. She helps him out and figures out that his name is Button Mash a video game designer. After spending a week with him she finds out that there's more to him than meets the eye.
Button Mash P.O.V
Button Mash leaves off to see his new video game and comes back not the way he expected. It could have been the fact that a mysterious pony passed him by earlier. With his strange appearance he decides to live at the Castle of the Two Sisters. Later on, he meets a strange draconequus named Discord who helps him become a pony again but it is only temporary. What will Button do once he is a pony again?
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This takes place in the future
Around 10 years later
This is so, so good! It puts a whole new look onto Beauty and The Beast and Button Belle! Ugh, I love this so much! I thought the beginning of the first chapter was a bit rushed, but after that, you smoothed it out really well and now it looks AMAZING! When I realised you had shipped Spike Bloom; my heart skipped a beat! SQEEEEE!!! AND YOU HAD SCOOTALOO AND RUMBLE! Ugh! I CAN NOT wait for the next chapter! You're a really good writer and you should most definitely continue! I can't wait to see the part where they meet! Wait... I was wondering, are there going to be like enchanted objects? I hope there are! That'd be awesome!!!!!
CAN"T WAIT!
5704107
There are some unfortunate implication right there, author.
The short, this story was too fast. It felt like it was rushed, leading to me not enjoying it. If I were to make a suggestion, get a proofreader.
5703928 I'm sorry I'm an idiot I meant to delete only my comments and I did that without thinking....
5704107 Thank you but your probably the only person who thinks so
But you lift my spirits so I will keep going
5704285 Noted....
Cute. A bit fast paced but not bad for a first story! 9/10!
5704449 aw thank you
Yes I know it's fast paced
But I will try my best
Cute! keep going!
Button! What did you do!
5704417 Don't get me wrong, it's a rather good first story, but the pacing is a bit of a deterrent for me.
Uh huh... Uh... Yeah. I know why you've been getting so much hate, but sadly, it's unfixable. The reason why it has little to no potential...
Is because your taking too many elements from a Disney movie. Just referencing them makes the internet revolt in disgust. The only person I've ever seen not crash and burn when making a Disney reference is Harmony Charmer. In my opinion, not a bad idea. Also, Zecora rhymes with her scentences, not every phrase. That would make it a tab more readable.
I love the rhyming! You did a great job on that! The story itself is okay for a start, only part I kind of don't like is how Button became a beast. Apart from that, it's really good!
Why is it cancelled? Why? Please, I want more! More! It was getting so good! Such a shame!!!
Just taking a stroll down memory lane.
If anyone finds this I'll paypal you $10. Pm me with physical proof.
Jk. I won't pay you I'm broke.