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Luna's Honor

Two earth ponies, Caffeinated and Thespian enjoy the festivities of the Winter Solstice on Stallion Island just south of Manehattan. They celebrate through song and poetry, and have some fun at the possible expense of the Princess of the Night

Cover art by Luthien Nightwolf
Caffeinated and Thespian are © their players
All others © their respective owners

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Teeemu

Teeemu #1 · Jan 12th, 2015 · · ·

I really liked this story, it was just a simple and refreshing love story of the day in the life of a mare and her stallion.

A few grammar problems here and there. I would advise getting it proof read just to neaten it up.

I would also suggest changing the description, since Caffeinated is a Zebra and not an earth pony, to something like:

Two Lovers, Caffeinated and Thespian

Just to avoid confusion

Otherwise, keep up the good work

Zervon Tora

Zervon Tora #2 · Jan 12th, 2015 · · ·

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Thank you for your comments.

I must admit I’m not well steeped in Equestrian races. I do know that the zebras are considered one of the races, but I may have wrongly thought they were still earth ponies from a far off land. From an Earth perspective both horses and zebras are all in the equus genus. Since Zebras have no wings or a horn I made that assumption.

I will also admit my story is at my editors, but it was my first so I posted it before it was returned to me. I will take into account any recommended changes and update the story.

WildfireRose