• Member Since 3rd Jan, 2015
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Huntress of Sacred Dream

I've never been on this website before, so forgive me if I'm not the best. I'm a 15 year old girl just trying to find her place in the world of writing - I hope you enjoy my stories!


They seemed perfect. One was just as they imagined. The other was not. He was a prodigy. He seemed perfect. She reminded him of someone else. Someone who had lived moons ago. Someone who is not finished yet. In fact, she has barely even begun...


Chapters (1)
Comments ( 3 )

Hmm...very intriguing, very intriguing indeed. You, ma'am, have piqued my interest.
One small thing you may want to fix would be this line:

they were bright with a fire og rage

Other than that little error, I really enjoyed this beginning and can't wait to read more!


Thanks so much! :twilightsmile:

I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

This seems pretty interesting...Not a lot of stories that I've read had this sort of heat between Celestia and Luna. In my head I'm just wondering what it has to do with the plotline and how this is going to plan out???
Update this soon - confusing stories always leave me wanting more! :raritystarry:

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