This was glorious.
Thank you sir, may I have another?

Heh. Luna's a little devil, ain't she?

This was fun, if not a bit... bare bones. I can see this being just a few more chapters, not the huge ordeal that Kinds of Love was. The sex was fairly straight forward, and again, I assume that the sex isn't the focus, but on how Celestia deals with what I guess will be blooming feelings for Twilight, while Twilight adjusts to the whole "having a dong" thing. It'll be interesting to see if Celestia is as straight as Luna claims her to be. Will she be able to still have feelings for Twilight once he becomes a mare again? Or would Twilight choose to stay a stallion to be with Celestia? Does she even really live Celestia, or is this just pent-up frustration and lust?

Many questions, and I'm curious to see the answers.

This felt way off for me. On the one hand, there are a number of typos that kept yanking me out of the story.

And on the other, Celestia was right. What Luna did was low, but not in the sense I assume you wanted Celestia to mean. Luna forced Twilight to be a stallion for reasons that don't sit well with me.

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I wasn't exactly happy with certain parts of this story. I prefer a more consensual Twilestia experience, with both of them having romantic feelings for the other from the get go. That and making Celestia straight was, in my opinion, kind of counter-productive to the whole 'Twilestia' thing, as you know, a long-lasting, loving relationship between them that does not make. The whole gender-swap thing as well was somewhat uncomfortable for me, but I shouldn't be one to complain, I've written weirder things.

All of that being said, the story itself was well-written (except for some typos, but hey, we all make those mistakes), and a part of me tentatively wants to see where this goes, so I will add it to my Twilestia Clop folder and read any future chapters. Hopefully you can persuade me my early doubts were unfounded.

Came here expecting Robin Williams.

Oops, uh, Luna, you should probably turn Twilight back into a mare.

Not futa
thank the fucking lord

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or not, and see where this goes.
or twi can make celly bent like bent paperclip, err, a regular one, as to not make it straight.

Wait on a sec, she actually physically changed Twilight into a stallion!? Oh boy this is going to cause problems, poor Twilight.

Hmm therr are several things that need to be tied up and typos but otherwise not bad.

5537091 Uh, sorry, but... what? Luna forced nothing upon Twilight, from what I can tell. Twi could've just said "no" and I thoroughly doubt that Luna would've said "too bad". The change to being male is certainly not permanent, or it would not have been used.

Is this a TwiLestia fic?

Is this a TwiLestia fic?

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To be fair, I don't think she was expecting to remain a stallion when she woke up.

I 'really' hope this is one of those where the next part actually comes and not a one-shot that just hasn't been marked complete yet XD I 'really' wanna see Their reactions when they realize what happened.... ... poor luna.

Am I the only one who was hoping Twilight would break down crying at the fact that Celestia preffers dominant males while she was a female implied sub so that Celestia would come out and comfort her?

Some studies (and experience) have indicated that people in authority will have submissive fantasies - the unconscious desire to have others make decisions for them, instead of the other way 'round. So Celestia's fantasy is actually what you might expect. The maid uniform's a nice touch.

Twilight, on the other hand, had to be sold on the idea of a) being dominant and b) being a stallion. Luna did a fair job of persuading her, but it seems that Twilight's got enough raw magical power to change her own gender in the waking world.

Fun times. Are you going to add more to the story?

5538930 give her a few minutes to pro- (NNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!)
There we go... And now I must go fist bump Luna

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Same. Why must the author hurt me in this way?

Awesome, just awesome

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To be honest, I was just stealing a line from Shakespeare. I didn't even know it was a Robin Williams movie.

5539477 I accept that, author. Just... my heart.

5537816 well, we know that twighlight can loose control over her magic and she is obviously willing to change her gender to be with celestia. So this might be her own subconsciousnesss doing. I hope so, it could make a really exciting story.

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I think the unspoken context is that it -wasn't- a dream at all. Celestia wouldn't be walking funny if it was a dream, and Twilight wouldn't be a stallion. When you view the latter, it might be chalked up to Twi's random-ass magic. But together?

So... she intrudes on both dreams, makes them aware, and they let her live? More to the point, allow her to do anything of that nature? Little to no character > another pointless clopfic

Luna sat outside of Celestia's door as the last hour of the night had started. She should be waking soon. She opened the door to reveal Celestia standing beside her bed.

Is that second "she" supposed to be italicized?

Ah, the futa killed it for me. It was well-written though and very interesting.
But since it is a clopfic and the fact that I am not a fan of futa; I will have to stop reading. Keep it up anyhow.

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It's not futa, it's gender bender. Twilight didn't grow a dick, she turned into a stallion.

This was going great... And then Twilight grew a penis. Why do good authors never warn their readers of the content?

One does not call herself the princess of the night without being adapted to the dark.

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(Sex changing + Lucid Dreaming)+Feeling it after the fact= All my yeses.

Do you mind if I use that in some of my future fics? I have a feeling that it could be a very interesting trope / thing to play with.

oh my seems twilight has good control over her own dreams at least when shes aware shes dreaming

I got to say, my heart dropped when I found out this was going to be straight stuff. Still, the story is very interesting.

If there's anything mythology, Earth mythology and even fantasy mythology like D&D, has taught me, it's that an immortal/god/demigod's barn door never only swings one way. It swings both ways. And up and down. And all the way around. And sometimes does loop-de-loops.

But I guess Celestia is just boring, like Luna says

I hath

"hath" is the archaic form of "has" and "I has" is bad grammar. It's just "I have" as in modern English.

far weirder

"far stranger" would feel more natural for Luna. (Using "weird" that way is a modern thing and, given that "strange" is still a perfectly good word, I doubt Luna would have seen it worthwhile to put in the effort to change her speech habits from "strange" to "weird".)