• Member Since 31st May, 2014
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Voltsthevoltvolts


Cannot physically write word that make logic... But ohmaigod do I try. Currently has no Computer! Hooray for a ten year old laptop!

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Duskshire face many problems from the surrounding forest, Shades, wildlife and vamponies. Oaken Shield, the head guard tends to the town like he tends to his filly however the adventurous spirit of the filly gets the better of her...

Follow Ivy Shield as she lives her life in the town of Duskshire, from meeting a stranger in the forest to visiting Fort city as an embassy.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 23 )

So...
This is interesting.
I'd say I'm surprised by the darker turn, but I guess one can only adorable-ise so much.

Oaken Shield, I see what you did there.

Glad to see you're not dead.

5435897

I could still make this adorable yet!

5436386

Yeah, I'm not dead. However I need to finish writing the other stories. I have also been tied up in a collab project.

So Hunters are essentially fully self-aware living dead.
Not classified as living, but not dead or undead either?

5440561

Very close, I would tell you but that would ruin chapter 3

Not bad, but the whole vampiricism concept is over publicised.
Same goes for zombification.
Werewolves and balverines are nowhere near as common.
...
Especially balverines.
The only time I've found mention of them outside of my family's old... antique... Irish mythology, and I mean that exactly how I said it, is in the Fable games, but those aren't the self-aware ones my family wrote of.

5443381

Yeah, vampires are overused a lot. I was going to go with a werepony originally, but dropped it during the planning stage due to changes.

5443381

Oh also, later on in the future something happens to Ivy. She doesn't turn into a vampony but it goes along the same lines, but that isn't until later on. Much later on.

Ten year time-skip?
Not bad.
just one question.
You've mentioned them, but just what IS a nail beast?

5462578

Yeah I didn't really want to have ten years worth of filler. And to answer the question on Nail beasts... Nail beasts are a tiger like predator that have a thick black hide and razor sharp talons. They locate their pray through echolocation. They hunt in packs small packs no greater then 7 and are often overwhelm their pray through sheer force. They also have a shrill howl which can disrupt magical fields and they have evolved to be able to hunt almost anything.

5462699 So basically a cross between wolves and mountain lions with a bit of bear thrown in for defensive measures.

5462722 Yeah

Also, if you have ever seen the show... A bit of future predator from Primeval.

... So that's a thing now?
Huh?
...
cool beans.

5468928

Sorry for my confusion, but what thing..? My mind has kinda blanked out.

5468931 Nevermind.
I don't actually have the capacity to explain it.
It makes sense to those who know, but you can't know if someone else knows until they reveal that they know.
...
As convoluted as that is, I have no better way of putting it.

5468946

Alright then... I mean, I might know it. I'm just really worn out currently and my mind isn't working properly.

5468959 I doubt it helps that my best explanation consist of gibbering absolute talkish.

5469484

Its ironic, I woke up today and though about it.

Then it hit me like a brick wall.

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