After the events of the Canterlot Wedding, Twilight meets the perfect coltfriend. Spike however thinks he's too perfect. Soon Applejack, Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie and Rarity meet their perfect stallions. However like Spike, the Cutie Mark Crusaders think they're too perfect a match. They soon discover that all of Equestria is in Jeopardy and they must find a way to save it.
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great concept, I like the way your going with this I hope this will turn out well.
also FIRST
I'm hooked. you just got a fav and like.
Hmm. TRACKING!
They soon discover that... that what?! WHAT DO THEY DISCOVER?!
hmm interested but is this like doctor who funny or stupid funny
i dont see the funny after reading it (not that im complaining im not a big fan of overkill comendys )
Haven't read it, but the 'there's in the summary make me twitch.
Soon Applejack, Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie and Rarity meet their perfect stallions. However like Spike, the Cutie Mark Crusaders think they're too perfect a match.
That's not even mentioning the last sentence that cuts off halfway.
526453 I do apologise for my terrible grammar in the description. I'm not very good at my their's, there's and they're's. (Yes I know that isn't a word). As for the description, I have no idea what happened. Changed now.
argh my curiosity has been sparked for a couple days FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
uhmm good job by the way
“Sorry Partner. Soarin’ bought all of them.”
Up on a cloud high above the park, Spitfire was sitting looking miserable, whilst Soarin’ gorged himself in his 4th pie. “Mm. So good,” he moaned.
“This wasn’t what I meant when you were getting pie tonight,” said Spitfire. Soarin’ wasn’t listening as he started on his fifth pie. “Worst, date, of my life.”
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Why do i feel like Borealis is a Changeling.
Help a changeling !!!
i cang wait for the next chap its super duper extra fun !
keep on going !!!!
Daaawww, ain't young luv just purty?
I can't wait to see what the actual revelation will be, though. My money is on the stallions being changeling infiltrators that end developing real feelings for the Mane 6.
aww twilight's boyfriend is cheating on her (unless you have another twist that im not thinking of or he saves her but whats the fun in that)
Hmmm.... I think I know what's gonna happen....
I love reading these things before the spelling errors are corrected, anywho nice story
Very good i shall keep reading this
I wonder where Twilight keeps 680 bits
Love it
yes this was great
Very good. Cant wait for more
Something's rotten in the state of Ponyville
all of the mane six hook up to evildoers i never read this before but I'm surprised i haven't weird oh well or maybe if you haven't changed the desc. twi's the only one stuck with the bad guy
THEY NEED A SHRUG EMOTE
Huh. So Fluttershy is hooking up with a stallion that's even MORE shy than she is... Which ends up meaning that Fluttershy is the braver one. Reminds of that episode of Billy and Mandy where they met an AU Billy that was dumber than the actual Billy and thus meant that the original was smarter.
You know, I'd blame the Changelings for trying to seduce the mane 6 but that seems a bit too easy. DISCORD!!!!!!!!
It was ment to be :D
I like this chapter AND the doctor who reference. chanarchive.org/content/8_tg/16671090/1318999939377.jpg
and once again the fourth wall breaks, exept in a more sexual way.
i never thought I would ever see someone like pinkie pie. very good story.
aww sheet
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d'awwww
fantastic as usual
A bit of an A-hole moment for Twilight.
Lets see how long it takes for Spike and the CMC to realize what is really going on.
Borealis spoke in such short, well-worded sentences. I read his parts in Mordin Solus' voice against my will.
glad to see it's still going strong
wonder what will happen next?
All right I think I'm starting to understand what's going on here this guy is some sort of shapeshifter all he needs to do is make physical contact with any mare you can change into their ideal stallion and he seems to have some kind of seduction powers that makes him their only main focus it makes sense seeing as how none of the other boyfriends are present when one is
Aaaaaaand there's goes another story with promise...
When did the Second In Command of the Decepticons turn into a pony