After a night of partying with her friends, Fluttershy decides that a good sleep is in order. But when she spots something moving in her garden she must investigate. What she finds is beyond horror and she would soon find out that she should of stayed inside.
Have you considered a beta-reader by any chance?
5430114 no, I try to edit them myself. But thank you for pointing this out to me. Have a nice day :)
This is amazing! I really like the plot line, very clever.... keep going, can't wait to see more!
Woa man,I expect to see more of this. Keep it up!
5431697 Thank you !
5431166 Thanks, I'm gonna send out another chapter pretty soon :)
Yay! I was going to ask when the Mane 6 wouldmcome in... Great chapter
5432894 Thanks
Just read the third chapter. Reeeeeeally good story!
5433400 thank you :)
Question! Did you use a voice to text program for the recent chapter because theres quite a few mistakes in just the first opening paragraphs.
5437994 No I didn't, I'll try to fix them right away.
*gasp& What a twist!
wait. THIS IS THE END! What the heck? There better be a sequel or something. I hate cliffhangers not resolved
My brain hurts
Oh dear sun-butt
No? NO!! CLIFFHANGER?!?!?!!?!?!? CONTINUE THIS OR I'LL HAVE PINKIE CUT YOU!
Just kidding! Great story though I'd like to see this be continued it was satisfying enough I guess.. What?
Cough anyway have a like and a mustache
oh no.......
Oh dear..........
Why am I reading this?
Oh no.....
Story said it was complete but I'm seeing a total lack of an ending Where is the whole curing Fluttershy thing?