• Member Since 20th Dec, 2014
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SterlingCabin


I sit alone in my computer chair, fingers wired to the individual keys of my laptop. A startling realization crawls up my spine, I write MLP fanfiction for fun....I'm at peace with that.

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After a night of partying with her friends, Fluttershy decides that a good sleep is in order. But when she spots something moving in her garden she must investigate. What she finds is beyond horror and she would soon find out that she should of stayed inside.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 22 )

"Fluttershy awoke to a soft mummer, just barley out if earshot. It must of been Angle in his sleep, she thought to herself."

Have you considered a beta-reader by any chance? :ajbemused:

5430114 no, I try to edit them myself. But thank you for pointing this out to me. Have a nice day :)

This is amazing! I really like the plot line, very clever.... keep going, can't wait to see more! :raritywink:

Woa man,I expect to see more of this. Keep it up!

5431166 Thanks, I'm gonna send out another chapter pretty soon :)

:pinkiehappy: Yay! I was going to ask when the Mane 6 wouldmcome in... Great chapter :twilightsmile:

Just read the third chapter. Reeeeeeally good story! :twilightsmile:

Question! Did you use a voice to text program for the recent chapter because theres quite a few mistakes in just the first opening paragraphs.

5437994 No I didn't, I'll try to fix them right away.

wait. THIS IS THE END! What the heck? There better be a sequel or something. I hate cliffhangers not resolved

No? NO!! CLIFFHANGER?!?!?!!?!?!? CONTINUE THIS OR I'LL HAVE PINKIE CUT YOU! :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

Just kidding! :yay: Great story though I'd like to see this be continued it was satisfying enough I guess.. What?
Cough anyway have a like and a mustache :moustache:

Story said it was complete but I'm seeing a total lack of an ending Where is the whole curing Fluttershy thing?

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