Shadow Vine, the Daughter of the Everfree, only ever had two friends in her life, Lunar Fire, the Devil Child and Night Wind, the Forbidden One. all three held a secret behind their titles, each kept it from one another, and each nearly lost the friendship of the others because of it. After realizing how close her friendships were to breaking, Night Wind brought them together to end their secrets, learning a valuable lesson in friendship along the way.
but this isn't a story about these three repairing their friendship, this is a story of how this lesson would be needed to save the world from an evil king when he's become far stronger than before.
When Sombra returns and prepares to destroy Equestria, the main six rise with the element to face it, only to fail, but... why?
Harmony is powered by friendship, so when friendship falters, Harmony falls
Shadow and her two friends must rekindle the friendships of the element bearers so that they can defeat the ancient demon, but to do so, they must find the secrets each hides and get the bearers to reveal them to each other. Along the way, they will find themselves entangled in an ancient prophesy relating to six little fillies, the Daughters of Harmony.
When secrets are kept, friendships begin to crumble. When secrets are revealed, true friendships strengthen to surpass all evil.
-I'm going to try a few new things in this story
-AU for several reason, mainly because of the secrets mentioned
-will include OOC characters
-I'm unsure of weather the 'Slice of Life' tag is needed, do say so if you think it is
-don't forget to say why you like/dislike the story
-The description, characters, and tags are subject to change should I see it fit
Includes some aspects from the following
-Cupcakes
-Rainbow Factory and Pegasus Device
-Friendship is Witchcraft
-Story of the Blanks
so thanks to the creators of each for such themes that can be so easily interpreted how one wishes
Warning, I've never read Cupcakes
If Shadow Vine, Lunar Fire, and Night Wind were voiced, what would they sound like?
5278789 I really don't know. Probably like little girls, since that's what they are.
Shadow Vine would have an eerie undertone to her voice
Lunar Fire would have a demonic edge
and Night Wind would have a slight echo (similar to Chrysalis' voice from 'A Canterlot Wedding Part 2' but younger and not as evil sounding)
This is certainly an intriguing start. Grammar and such seem to be spot on, too.
Can't wait to see what the rest is like.
Also, may I just say that I find it quite impressive you wrote this complete story with so little in the way of comments and such. I know personally how hard it is to push through big projects, especially without feedback.
7281261 Thanks for the comment. It wasn't as hard as you probably think though. I'm generally not effected by what others comment or review about my stories.