In all the right ways

by Gemzi

Chapter 3. My Dearest Fluttershy...

"Hmm...... what would be next..." Sketchie pranced ariund the room, wondering what else Discord would need to impress Fluttershy. So far they worked on manners, compliments, gestures, which fork to use when eating salad..

"Aha! I've got it!"

"Got what? Head lice?" Discord joked, getting a glare from Sketchie.

"No, you big dummy. Our next lesson."

"Your no fun," Discorc complained. "Anyway, what else do I have to do?"

"You need to work on what your going to say."

"What do you mean? I have no idea what your talking about," Discord said, sarcastically.

"You can't just stroll in and say, "Yo dawg. I heard you like trains. Wanna go out with me?" Sketchie said.

"I wouldn't mind. Besides, it sounds cooler that way." Discord chuckled.

"Well, if your uncomfortable doing it infront of me, write it down on a piece of paper."

"Alright, but I'm leaving. Adios amigo." and with that, Discord teleported out if there, leaving Sketchie to finish the dishes.

Soon, Discord got to Fluttershy's place. Fluttershy gladly welcomed him, letting him inside.

Discord went upstairs while Fluttershy was cleaning took out a peice of paper and started getting all poetic.

My dearest Fluttershy.....

Your eyes sparkle light bright stars, twinkling every second.
Your fragrant scent is something I cherish every moment I am around you.
Your sweet voice is something the whole world adores to hear.
When you smile, the world stops and looks for a while.
Your stare is simply ravishing, looking into your deep teal eyes.

"Okay. That's enough for now." Discord said.

Discord rolled up the scroll and tied it with the red ribbon almost everyone used.

"Discord, I'm going to the market. I'm going upstairs to grab my list and I'll be on my way. You can stay, if you don't mind, that is." Fluttershy said, flying upstairs.

"Actually I will be going now, one of my friends asked me to go to canterlot castle to meet me there. Thank you for welcoming me, my dear." Discord said when she came back down.

"Alright, see you soon." and Fluttershy took off.

Discord went upstairs, and went to get the poem.

Huh, I could have sworn I put this over here. Maybe the wind blew it across the vanity....

Discord grabbed the scroll and flew back to the castle.

"What took you so long? Sketchie asked.

"Getting my poetic side on. You can read it if you like," he stated, handing the scroll over.

"This better be good,"she chuckled." What is this?"

"I knew it..."

"Two catrons of eggs? One gallon of milk? Five bunches of carrots? This is a grocery list!"

"Wait, what?" Discord asked, startled. "Let me see that."

Discord's eyes scanned over the paper. She was right. That must mean Fluttershy....

"Oh no!"

Fluttershy walked into the market, taking out her list. She looked at it, wondering what to get first, and gasped.

Fluttershy read it over. The sparkling eyes, beautiful voice, amazing stare.... There was only one person who admired her stare.

"YES!!! YES YES YES YES YES!!!" Fluttershy screamed, jumping, and getting stares from passerbys.

"Um....." and with that, Fluttershy happily flew home with the scroll in her hands, daydreaming of what will happen next.

Author's Note:

Read the suggestions, and hopefully this is long enough for you. Thanks for feedback!

Comments

[Conred]

Need to have a longer chapters. At least 2000 words each. Short scenes are just too forgetable.

[Cheznuts]

It's fine on making short chapters, but it has to be at least everyday you publish more of this romantic stories of yours. I like this and I can't wait for more. Fluttercord forever!!!

[atomicpuffin]

This is really cute I do wish the chapters were longer but that's ok so long as you're comfortable with them and keep them coming

[kushi02]

this story is really cute i hope you write more

[Zimbawe]

I lllllooove it. I love the writing and the romance. Right now I am screaming inside because I want to read more. Keep up the good work!

[Rowan Stormseeker]

My dear author,
I will do nearly anything to assist you in speeding this story along. I freaking love this story so much.

[atomicpuffin]

Awww Oh I hope you update soon it's killing me not knowing what's happening hope you can update soon look forward to reading the next chapter

[hhhhhhh]

Gaaaaahhhhhhhhh....
Update! Pwease! Even though you just killed me with the cuteness, I still want more!!!
Oh...uhh...i-if that's alright with you, that is...
I saw the grocery list swapped with the poem coming from a hundred miles away, but it's still far too adorable...

[Dr midnight]

next chapter please