This is the story of a race of dragon-like heroes known as the Guardians who have protected the lands bordering their home for eons. Now with a great evil devastating their fortress home, it is up to a young boy, Orpheus, to brave the odds and deliver a warning to Equestria.
This is only the beginning of a much greater tale that leads one hero to find that even in the darkest of times, he is not alone.
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Very good story line and i cant wait to see it continued.
There are a few spelling and grammar mistakes but really nothing to ruffle feathers about.
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(a bit late with this, but here it goes) I really liked this story. I can not comment on spelling, as I listened to it instead of reading, but I can assure you that you do not make many grammatical errors. There is one part of the story though in which you change from third person to second person point of view, which you don't normally do, especially while sticking to the same character. The story was interesting. When I saw the "dragonkin," I was expecting something along the lines of Skyrim. But this story was totally new, and very emotional. It did make me cry at the part when Celestia tells Orpheus what happened (especially the part about his father). All in all, great job, keep writing, and I hope more people see your stories in the future