Fixed most of the grammatical errors.

Fixed a problem with the chapter title numbers.

Added more to the end of chapter one!

GO CHECK IT OUT!!!

http://graybard.tumblr.com/

There ya go XD

Finally got my story published, and I'm waiting for mod approval.

This is my first story EVER read by those not within my inner circle...

Or in short I'm terrified beyond reason.

Oh and yet again, sorry I took so long, and thank you for being patient.

Well, happy birthday to me I guess...sorry about the story being late shadowgear, I just need a little more time to get it as right as humanly possible XD

I NEED CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM. LOTS OF IT.

Well here I am, I know many (if not all of you) have no idea who I am, but I'm hoping I will become someone you recognize. I'm not really out to be the pony everypony should know, just finally trying my hand at writing for an audience bigger than myself and a few friends. I am very shy and work slow, but what I want to do is finally expand and meet people and stop being this shelled up little dork.

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