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Winter's Comin' Early

One shot Nightmare Night story for the Ponyverse group Nightmare Night story contest.

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Batbrony

Batbrony #1 · Oct 28th, 2014 · · ·

Wohoho! Doozy of an ending! Admittedly a bit clunky at times, some grammar/punctuation errors here and there, but that ending was pretty darn good if I do say so myself. Very nice entry Cimmaronbrony, very nice indeed.

Comment posted by Cimarronboy deleted Oct 28th, 2014

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Cimarronboy #3 · Oct 28th, 2014 · 1 · ·

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Glad I got the effect I wanted from the ending. As per the grammer, you'll have to pardon me as I'm "in training" in that department atm. Also thx for the fave

Batbrony