It's Nightmare Night in Ponyville, and Zecora is leading the walk in the Everfree Forest. When Apple Bloom wanders off on her own, she finds out first hoof why ponies stay far away from the forest.
In the spirit of Halloween, enjoy.
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OOOOOOOHHHH YA! Did not see that coming. Seriously every pony who doesn't see fiction as an opportunity to insert whatever nightmarish thing they can imagine into everyone's favorite death trap (Equestria) is seriously missing out.
You gained one follower my friend!
Perfect for Halloween.
I don't get it...
But liked and followed anyway.
I was expecting a red spy but no matter.
5149194 Boys we have a traitor.
5153427 but of course *cloaks*
Ya know, when I first read this, I thought it was a pretty decent and spooky fix, so I gave it my like and moved along. However, last night I was leaving a friend's house at 3am or so. The street was deserted and fairly dark. As I walked toward my car, I heard this weird chirruping noise from somewhere down the street. For some reason, immediately thought of this creature you created, and an actual chill ran down my spine.
It seems your little piece affected me more than I thought. Well done!
5163028 Your comment really made my day
. It's so nice to know that people are really interested in my work.
It's pretty interesting how with monsters, it's not always what they'll do to you that makes them stick. Sometimes it's their sheer creepiness.
I have to be honest, this really didn't phase me. What was the bit at the end, where Apple Bloom hears her friends calling her? Was that supposed to indicate that the danger had passed, or did I miss something there?