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Cirrus Sky

I get too many ideas. Mostly Femslash. Lots and lots of femslash.

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Sometimes a lady can come undone from the most unexpected of observations. Rarity knows this. Though it seems her little crush on a certain princess has many new and positive potential aspects after this particular one.
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Complete Published: Oct 13th, 2014 Download
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Zeyon The Green
Zeyon The Green #1 · Oct 13th, 2014 · · ·
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:unsuresweetie: Needs a spelling and grammar edit, misuses of quotation marks and seemingly lacking a draw really. Also none of the other girls notice this exchanging of glances. Interesting, but not enough plot.

AleaJactaEst
AleaJactaEst #2 · Sep 26th, 2015 · · ·
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Carrelot

Actually, cant help but laugh for a while. Canterlot.

set some hours ago

Few will fit better.

sat around the fire

seating

and
Twilight had smiled and Rarity had shied away, embarrassed. Her mind had wandered away to prevent a slip-up.

Not actually a mistake, but it looks frustrating.

cords

Acords, probably.

Okay, slightly enjoyable, thought it's quite old and i've already read something else of yours... I think, i can forget it:pinkiesmile:
Best of luck:twilightsmile:

Hokuto Ulrik
Hokuto Ulrik #3 · Dec 20th, 2015 · · ·
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I would love to see more of this. The musical seduction is an interesting route and I enjoyed the ride.

ScisetShimmerEvan
ScisetShimmerEvan #4 · Dec 10th, 2022 · · ·
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“Well done girls.” Twilight said when they finished. “I never knew you were so musically talented.

A " is missing at the end.

Twilight finished her musical recital with another soft smile, this one directed entirely at Rarity, it was a smile with a vexing and alluring hint of smugness. ‘She has certainly been spending some time with Cadence.’ Rarity thought, blinking rapidly to try and quash a blush (at least her proximity to the flames could explain that away). It looked like she needed to invite Twilight for a drink and a long chat some time soon.

A space is needed following the first sentence.

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