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Wow....
Just Wow. The Idea I See Is Interesting, But The Words Need Better Formulating... I Will Keep My Eye On This One
... I Will Also Give You A Like For The Idea...
Silver Spade
I don't think all those downvotes are really warranted. For the most part it seems decently executed. Grammar and spelling and such are good, good enough for me to not find any glaring errors.
I probably won't follow this story, as it doesn't interest me a great deal, but it earned an upvote at least.
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I appreciate that. More than anything I was looking for insight on the abysmal like / dislike ratio, but it comforts me to know that I'm not alone in thinking it's unwarranted.
That's was hart to read.
I don't know I mean except for the fact the fic is a walking MacGuffin, it's pretty good.
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Yeah, after the overly ambitious and generally messy narrative of 'Surge', I decided to go for something much more grounded and focused; even if it meant ultimately funneling the mane six through a bloody tsunami of unforgiving circumstances. If you're to believe Pinkie Pie, this shockingly steep path into desolation is at the hands of forces beyond the ponies. Or, perhaps 'Sugar Valley' is a comprehensive look into what Pinkie's magic can do when aligned against her friends (and the Equestrian way of life as a whole), as opposed to being used in the interest of fourth wall gags.
Anyway, glad you liked it!
Well it's not an ending I was expecting. I mean I kinda thought that it would turn out that twilight was dreaming from women she woke up to the end of it being a dream and she was still in sugar valley but all in all its a good story
5427411 I think the reason for all of the down votes is because of the subject matter and how ooc Pinkie is behaving(thanks to the torture I know but still really ooc for her).
For me, it's like a train wreck happening and slow motion in HD in a Michael Bay movie. It looks like it could be completely and utterly awesome or devastatingly terrible but I can't look away either way.
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Yeah, I guess.