Chapter 4
Chapter 4
you walk towards the rooftop with your lunch floating magically beside you.
“strange, usually there's a lot more crowd here, especially during lunch break”
you think to yourself
“not that I mind the peace and quiet though”
you sit on a bench and start eating your lunch, when suddenly you hear some bushes rustle behind you.
“Hello? Anyone there?” you ask
...no answer...
“must have been a bird or something” you think as you continue eating
*rustle rustle*
“there it is again”
“this stopped being funny from the first second, come out”
not soon after Trixie steps out of the bushes
“you!” you say with anger in your voice
“you have a lot of explaining to do!”
“uuhm... Trixie... would like to.. a..a...a..apologize”
“apologize? You?”
“is that a problem? She asks with her old snobby voice
“no.. no.. not at all, you just didn't look like the apologizing type”
“Trixie is really sorry about what happened in the hallway, I already explained to the teacher that you had nothing to do with it”
“well, that earned my forgiveness, but you should really apologize to the first year that's in the nurses office”
Trixie suddenly looks very surprised
“The nurses office? But Trixie didn't even touch her, she fell down herself as soon as I cornered her”
“yeah about that, why did you do that in the first place?”
then Trixie's surprised look turned into one of somepony who just stepped in poop or something
“she! She threw a slice of pizza from the garbage against Trixie's flank.. wich was stuck for Celestia knows how long! I tried everything to get that disgusting thing off, I showered 4 times, until finaly Twilight was able to pull it off!”
“also..uuhmm.. about those other things you said in the hallway...”
suddenly Trixie's blushes
“NO!! I didn't mean a thing I said! I was nervous alright! I'd never do such things!”
“uuhh.. I was talking about Twilight..”
“oh.. right... that....” she says as she blushes even harder
“I guess... I was a little.. jealous”
“Sparkle always gets attention from everypony, if we go shopping, colts check out Twilight but not Trixie”
“so you blant out things out of pure jealousy. well isn't that a good trait?” you say with that farmiliar sarcasm.
“again with the sarcasm”
“Anyway, I said what I wanted to say, I'll be taking my leave then” she said as she stormed down the staircase”
“she's a strange one alright” you think to yourself.
After that you make your way to Equestrian history class, and again, you're too late.
“Why are you late this time?” asks the teacher.
“Because the bell rang before I got here”
“CONGRATULATIONS!” the teacher yelled while clapping his hooves together
“you just won the award for the most clever answer I ever got, your price is 4 hours of detention”
The entire class bursts out in laughter.
“Now take your seat and be quiet unless asked a question”
you take your seat next to Twilight
“You know it's not a good idea to be a smart ass with professor Whooves” Twilight whispered
“O really? Gosh I had no idea” you whispered back.
“Do I need to make it 2 days of detention?” the teacher says.
“NO SIR!” you yell and sit up straight.
“You really are an idiot” Anton whispers from behind you
“Shut up”
The rest of the day went by pretty quickly, as soon as you heard that sweet sound of the last bell you rush towards the school gate
“JUST A MINUTE THERE!”
you turn around and saw professor Whooves standing there with a stern look on his face
“Forgot about detention have we?”
“uuhh...”
“No, he's late for practice” you heard coach Armor say
“Aren't you?” He said and winked
“R-right”
Professor Whooves let out a sigh of annoyance
“Very well... proceed...”
“Thanks coach Armor, if there's anything I can do to repay you, let me know”
“Well...” he started
“We DO need a new player for blast-ball, do you know how to play?”
“Well I get the basic principle yes.. The one team tosses balls at you and you have to destroy, or block them without having them touch the floor, walls, ceiling or your body right?”
“And halfway through the positions change, the attackers become defenders”
“Exactly” coach Armor says
“So... You in?” He asks
“Yes sir” you answer
“Great, now that was your tier level again?
“5 sir”
“LEVEL 5?” his jaw almost hits the ground
“ON YOUR AGE? That's it, you're going straight to the front line, we have a match against the Manehattan Bashers next month, you think you're up for it?”
“YES SIR!” you answer with much enthusiasm in your voice
“Great, practice starts tomorrow morning and we'll be busy the entire day, so I'll get you out of class”
“Sweet”
“Don't be so sure, the training is hard and rigorous, Don't expect me to go easy on you just because you're close friends with my sister”
“Your sister?” you ask
“Who's your sister?”
“Twilight” he answers
“YOU'RE TWILIGHTS BROTHER??”
“She didn't mention me during your little date and sleepover?” he asks
“Oh Celestia... He knows..”
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"Facehoof"
I didn't know twilight had another brother?
761079
Um, it's still Shining Armor, he just has a different occupation, I think...
761259
Yes, this is from before he became captain of the guard.
761264
yay, I was right.
You may want to look this over... Use italics when thinking, it helps it out a lot, use the Tab key to indent your paragraphs, and capitalize some of the sentences, like when tricks said "she! She..." blah blah blah, etc.
It was hard for me to read this time:(
764252
I wrote this deep in the night, I haven't slept in 4 days, I am studying abroad starting today so I'm under a lot of stress, yet people keep pushing me to upload new chapters, so sorry this isn't of the greatest quality ever, that's one of the reasons why I put it on hiatus, as soon as I'm settled in I'll start writing good chapters of only the most exquisite lols and quality.
764252
I have a better idea,
WHO WANTS TO HELP ME?
I WRITE CHAPTERS AND ONE (or 2) OF YOU CLEAN THEM UP??
this way I can write chapters and NOT fail every class I'm supposed to study for.
764273I'll try to help you edit, but no promises, I have ' through te darkness the lone blades light the way' to write
764285
ah yes, I am familiar with the story
I like it :)
and thank you, for the offer, I'll propably have chapter 5 ready in a few more weeks.
764299 oky doky loky! Send me a link to a gdoc when you have it done
Wait,sooo this means that after me thinking that this was nevergoing to be continued a new chapter arrives!!!!!!!!!!!! YaY!!!! I don't know if you rememberme author but thanks!!!!!!
870301
ofcourse I remember you
They don't call me loyalty for nothing
874493
I am glad that even though I had to put the story on Hiatus for a while, fans still remain loyal.
Trust me, as soon as the first vacation comes along I'll start writing again.
And I'll be waiting...
Your loyal reader: scarlet rider
And I'll be waiting...
Your loyal reader: scarlet rider>>874895
486206
>Your on my boat
>your on my
>your on
>your
Yes, you totally have perfect grammar.
930670
maybe his ' key is broken?
930840
It's not you'r, it's you're, if he said youre I wouldn't be mad.
930871
True, but "your" still looks more acceptable then "youre"