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Toxic Charm
Thank you to everyone who reads my stories,comment,and favorite. I appreciate all the support.
Toxic Charm
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Misery by Stephen King in pony form... kinda I like it.
5061304 I'm very glad you like it :) i was thinking of that story a bit when the idea came to me but I couldn't remember the title lol
Not gonna lie I enjoyed this.
But you should really fix the punctuation of the story.
5066277 I'm glad you liked it :) and I will be editing though later today,anything in particular that needs to be fixed?
Start with the first couple of paragraphs and work your way down.
Some words are lowercase when you start new sentences.
But like I like said I still enjoyed :) brohoof /)
5066816 ah thank you for bring that to my attention,I will fix those ASAP :) thank you very much for reading my story and for the advice
BROHOOF /) ~toxic
Only one think I noticed in the paragraph right after he got the erection you used the word "think" it should be thank
"There now you can think me property. ...."
See? Should be thank
Good idea, Needs work
5099570 needs work? NEEDS WORK?!?! NO i think the correct comment is "needs a sequel."
6698776 I just may make one now ;)
6722232 you cant see it but im jumping for joy as we speak.
6722997 there will be a sequal/revised version of this. The next one will retell this onebut add chapters,better sex scenes, and just mlre detail