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Toxic Charm
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I'm liking how the story is proceeding. The pacing is fairly good along with starting in medias rea.
My only complaint is the grammar and spelling. It's rife in this story. I'd recommend getting an editor or two to help out. Many people on this site want to help authors edit. All you need to do is ask.
Nice story you goos sir have earned a follower
may need a dark tag kind of got a little demented for a moment but all and all liked itkeep it up or this may happen to you HAHAHAHA
I'd love to see more of this because I think this is hot as heck. I have always been into the pet/master stuff especially when it comes to Luna and a human. It's hard to find good five like yours man. Keep up the good work.
So many grammatical errors its not even funny.
......... No.............. just.............. no...................
I hope he gets out and get to have a little pay back and show luna why humans are superior
Kill the bitch while she sleeps and then feast upon her flesh
haters the lot of you ...that or trolls
Meh I enjoy it don't worry about people who don't like it I support you
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if he hurts Luna, well just say, heeeeere's johny!
I do hope you keep this story going . And don't let the down votes get to ya
5176480 I think the reason for so many downvotes is because everybody's favorite pony Twilight is surprisingly OoC (That's 'Out of Character' for everyone not in the know.)
5176595 hmmm I see that point maybe an AU tag is in order so people know that this isn't canon to twilight's normal personality
5176770 Ah yes, pardon my neglectfulness.
5176770 And let's not forget that Jake has not yet been able to say one word about how he's been treated.
Wow
Why mods? Why you let this get posted?
Why is this entertaining?
wow , surprising how much of a turn off the aspect of a human being the pet in this kind of fic is for me , if it had been the other way around or even no human at all im sure i would have at least liked this somewhat....
but as for where the story's going right now , where is it going? is it going at all? what's with the sudden half assed attempts to bring some kind of emotional element into it at the very end here?........
5195318 for the most part I thought a human being a pet would be a good little twist on to something different. As for where it's going that's a surprise ;) what I will say is I did have it at the end because I kind of figured might as well make a ending
thank you for making me feel guilty about hating Luna i was all set to say that i would rather have Celestia kill me rather than stay Luna's pet then you throw this curveball now i feel guilty about wrongly judging Luna thank you for correcting my train of thought i look foreward now more than ever to your next chapter. BTW Twilight is a witch with a B if you get my drift
Right now stab luna trough her neck and whatch her drown in her own blood
Nextra chapter.please
5369749 it is coming shortly :) I'm very glad you like it
Update?
Update?
That poor boy, that is rape, kidnapping, and misuse of magic. She should be executed for this, all I need to do is capture her...
Ohh Luna you would obiosly mistake a wolf from a dog, I don't think he would be mercifull when he ríos your veins of your neck, as for you dude, fighting back, don't be submissive to a slaver, be free dont break, get out, use your instincts
Kill her just kill that bitch
She is worse than nightmare moon
6546055 well lets say that you did kill her well where does that put you? in a strange place filled with strange ponies and now you have murdered a princess and if you are captured there are things that are way more painful than what she has done.
8056499 never said ponies would have to notice
And besides humans are nothing but rebellious when facing a enslaver, a realistiv scenarion would have him try at least
Or escape and learn eldritch tomes to escape and go back home
8056504 but how would they not notice one of their princesses and the literal controller of the moon go missing. And yes it is in the human nature to rebel but there is only so much pain that the human body can endure and if you are smart you would be compliant to avoid any punishment not to mention the living situation would be better
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I would gather strike group of SAS and to kill this Lunar bitch and save guy. If Would have to I would figth my way through pathetic excuse of her guard to get to guy.
Or better yet take expeditionary US marine unit and after saving guy bombard Canterlot and Whole Equestria to dust