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5006765
Resolved. Thanks for the notice~
Someone might have a problem with spaceing in this fic.
Not bad. I like you're grammar a lot. Better than mine, for sure. The story didn't really suck me in though, but that's just me. I'm sure it'll capture the attention of others.
As for helping you, my criticism is probably all I can offer...
Never the less, keep writing, and stay magical
Sadly, I can only read this later... I'll get to it as soon as I can.
Sweet, I love it, good grammar too
Man, the votes on this fic right now are really disheartening.
5015115 Like, the tab spacing style?
5015121 Well, there really isn't a story yet. This is more of a mood setter. I have a fully complex and thrilling story (almost fully) planned for the complete release. Hope you'll comeback one day to give it a read. If not... well, thank your for your time and input anyways~
5015714 No rush. I can't wait to hear your opinion, if you ever feel like sharing it.
5016783 I'm happy to see that someone enjoyed it thus far.
But I chalk the grammar part up to Denim, who's been keeping me in line.
5018229 Not sure, I just know people have problems with how its spaced I really don't care.