Starkie
Joined 23rd Feb, 2012 ·
Offline
Also LikedSimilarAuthor
- shatterstar · 1.7k words · 62 23 · 3.2k views
- Cosmonaut · 4.9k words · 63 8 · 3k views
Stats
Page generated in 0.128 seconds
Total duration
689 users online
1,027,253 hits today, 2,280,440 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
I totally sidetracked this story, forgot what I was doing, filled in the blanks in the most meager ways, and sent it off to die.
I'm so sorry for all of you who read this. Please don't hate me for being a bad author and go read one of my other stories.
Funny concept, not the worst execution. Still, could have been better. At least it wasn't terrible, though.
Edit: Wow, you know what's horrible? The pedophilia aspect didn't even cross my mind. Celestia, I'm fucked up.
This is despicable.
You are despicable.
Cheerilee is not a pedophile.
You are a pedophile.
Won't somepony think of the foals!?
=-=-=-=
Also:
Some people think that she actually LIKES to get punished
Some people think that she actually LIKES
Some people think that she
Some people think
Some people
...wat?
HAHAHA Ending blew my mind. It was ok, but you didn't lie with your comment.
Honestly, if this were a serious story(I hope it's not) I would have jumped on your use of "wingboner".
From the looks of it, I was your first view Your welcome.
Hmm I may have just doubled the current views.
I'm done Biaaaaaa.
Aside from the people/ponies messup, I thought it was rather good myself.
472654
Yeah generally I'm against it too but I'm also a despicable shred of what used to be a moral being.
There just aren't that many characters for me to use so eventually this happens.
472673>>472707
Alright alright I'm fixing it...
Mature rating.
Ship fic.
Scoots and Cheerilee....
ohmy.
I could go my usual route of pointing how big of a mistake this piece of shit is (you know, write a whole dissertation, tearing it apart like I usually do), but you're not worth it. So, here's Fluttershy:
img.ponibooru.org/_images/f5dfeaf3ada7f9dc1c33b95da87f21f0/165744%20-%20fluttershy%20Fluttershy_says%20It%27s_true_it%27s_true_it%27s_damn_true.jpg
472996
...I think you mean this:
suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/14422537/images/1301538817799.jpg
473017
Oh hey it's you again, here's me giving a fuck.
473554 Well, clearly, since you responded.
img.ponibooru.org/_images/e06e78f2a72c28678eded61819970355/110036%20-%20animated%20ask%20ask_spike_da_dragon%20computer%20spike%20spinning.gif
473618
You win this round.
image.noelshack.com/fichiers/2012/17/1335385607-a90061d67889ac6c77ecea5.gif
my reaction to this sleep
746110
Wow...Never thought anyone would see this piece of crap again...
748215
lol i got bored and decided to browse the stories and came upon this lol
This is about where I decided to just give up.
i0.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/263/914/ede.jpg
Motherflitter. I'm horrid for reading this, but I have to say, I wish there was more. It's nicely paced. At least for an autistic pony like myself.
93 weeks later, and here's another comment. This story shall never die.