"I am sure there is an explanation for everything Zecora does. And if anypony here were actually brave enough to approach her, she would find out the truth." Twilight glanced out through the window again. "You know, I think it's time that happened." She focused her magic on the Zebra across the street, calling up a teleportation spell.
With a flash, Zecora appeared in the center of the group. Her eyes opened wide.
Everypony except Twilight screamed. Zecora screamed.
Twilight patiently waited for the screaming to stop.
Finally, it did stop. Pinkie kept going a few moments longer, but also stopped once Rainbow shoved a hoof in her mouth.
Now in silence, the ponies and the zebra stared at each other. For a long, tense moment, nothing happened.
"Do you ponies know where I could get some heart's desire?" Zecora asked, eventually. "My usual source for that flower was destroyed in a terrible fire."
Silence reigned again as the ponies all glanced to each other.
It was Fluttershy – of all ponies – who spoke up. "Um... well... I'm pretty sure the flower sisters would have it." She winced and hunkered down, but kept talking. "They have almost every kind of flower there."
"Is it the shop across the street with flowers on the door? They do not seem to be open anymore."
"They're probably just scared." Applejack backed up a little as she spoke.
"Right." Twilight nodded. "Come on, we'll go there with Zecora and talk some sense into them."
"Those ponies? They're the scardiest ponies around!" Rainbow dash flew up overhead.
Twilight looked up at her out of the corner of her eye. "You were pretty scared a minute ago, too, but that was easy enough to overcome."
"What?" Rainbow crossed her hooves in front of her chest as she hovered along. "I... I wasn't scared. I was, uh, just being protective of my friends!"
"Right." Twilight smiled and shook her head.
Okay, this one I like! Although I'm surprised Zecora didn't complain about being teleported without permission.
5050762 She did scream a bunch.
5050762
Eh, she's pretty pragmatic.
5050762 that most definately is the only problem. Maybe instead, twilight could have teleported her friends TO zecora. But yeah still a really good story
Good old Funk Master Z, always good for a rap. Silly ponies, always so
racistscared.KBO.
5050886
Heh, yeah, maybe that would have been better.
5050893
Well, tell your OC I'm sorry.
Also...
Ooh! A guessing game!
I love guessing games.
Hm...
I know! 'BOUNCING'!
Really, Pinkie, 'the bouncing crapper'?
That's the best kind!
I think I am seeing the moral to all of this and it is a dang good one...
Sometimes, when you follow certain suggestions, you take away all that you like about the show and wind up with a bad series.
Not that your story is bad, by any means. I mean that the show wouldn't have been as awesome as it would've been. You make it funny.
It's kind of like if someone wrote a fic called, "The overpowered rangers" and have the rangers use their zords right off the bat. Only to have their zords get taken out because the monster is still strong enough to throw the zords around the planet. (Would love that).
Applejack's right about the flower ponies, they get scared easily, especially if Daisy's shouting "The horror, the horror!"
5050886
5050834
I prefer it the way Twi did it. It has several advantages.
1) You are porting one pony not several
2) The zebra can't just run away
3) You don't have to convince your friends
4) You put the zebra off-balance in case you are wrong.
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5051004
Oh Power Rangers.
Now that was a predictable show!
5051032
Yeah, but that's why we love them!
5051039
Hm... yeah, I guess there are some advantages.
Still is kinda rude, though.
5051132
5051196
When you are overpowered, rudeness is just a thing that comes with.
5050893
I believe you mean intangible. Transparent means invisible.
5050886
Better the way it already is. Besides, it's Zecora. She lives in the Everfree Forest. The shamaness is USED to crazy shit.
5051343
Well, transparent and invisible aren't quite the same, but okay.
5051615
Of course she is! ^.^
(I wonder how Zecora found out about poison joke?)
Aww, but then we wouldn't have gotten all the hilarious Poison Joke side effects. Especially...
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5051680 Completely transparent would make it so light would pass straight through, making in invisible.
5051783 Which actually makes me wonder how Filly Vanilli is going to go. in fact it makes me wonder how a lot of episodes will go... like Magic Duel... I mean Magical Mystery Cure is obvious, but... well some others but yeah... This is gonna be an interesting ride.
can't wait for Luna eclipsed, One Bad Apple, Wonderbolts Academy, Equestria Games, and Twilight's Kingdom.
5051783
It's a price we have to pay for overpoweredness.
5050904 BigBadToyStore.com I got all 6 in a set for $500. Otherwise, each one costs $100
5051952
Completely transparent and having a refraction index identical to the surrounding material.
Refraction is why you can see glass, water, diamonds, and all manner of very transparent things.
Put the right kind of glass inside water, though, and the refraction indexes are very similar, making it very nearly invisible.
As far as I know, though, there are no liquid or solid materials with a refraction index anywhere near atmospheric air, which makes it hard to have things be invisible through transparency.
(Though certain types of metamaterials are being developed which show the promise of having negative refraction indexes... those, combined with transparent solids or liquids could effectively make perfectly invisible solid objects.)
Science is fun!
5051986
Isn't Magic Duel pretty obvious, too?
Haha! I'm back, and more powerful than ever thanks to my new amulet of +5 magic!
Trixie? Again? I thought we were over this.
I challenge you to a magic duel, for all of Ponyville!
Fine, let's get this over with. I'll start.
[Twilight casts magic missile]
You broke my necklace! *cries*
Still the most powerful. Now GTFO.
5052012
Heh, I just wrote Luna Eclipsed earlier today. ^.^
It was one of those that's actually pretty challenging to find a way to subvert... a lot of the season 2 episodes are ending up that way... is that a comment on the writers' improvement?
5052070 pretty much... yeah.
5051986
But I'm too scared to perform in front of a crowd!
Here, Flutters, I made a potion that should help with that.
What's that?
It's called 'alcohol', and it lowers your inhibitions.
~Three hours later~
Whoo! I love singing! Let's to it again!
Dear Fluttershy, whatever is wrong with you today?
AJ gave her some of her special cider.
I see.
Can I have some?
Eenope.
5052097 AH! SPOILERS! Get back Witch!
... besides I thought of several other solutions to that episode after I commented... I don;t want to hazard a guess because I want to see where this train wreck takes us.
5052070 Also... I knew this was going to be OP Twi, but come on... will there be no drama or character development to suggest that Twilight is not completely omnipotent and... Oh... I keep forgetting what I'm reading... Besides Magic Missile only does 1d4... though as the wizard gains levels... and provided Twilight is well beyond the level cap... Her magic missile will split Trixie in half! Twilight "Power Gamer" Sparkle must be stopped! Actually now that I think about it, how is Alicorn Princess Twilight "Mary Sue" Sparkle going to change the game? She's pretty much this world's god already... Oh! Speaking of "worlds" are you going to do Equestria Girls?
Think about it... crap I already wrote it in my head...
5052362
Oh, goodness, you're right!
I'll have to fit that in somewhere.
Now, the challenge, if I make it a separate story, like it should be, is finding a way to make OP Twilight blasting Sunset Shimmer as she tries to steal the crown in the first place take 1000 words or more.
Don't worry, I'll think of a different way to do it in the actual episode.
Actually, an idea just occurred to me.
5052421 You know I was thinking of that when I wrote My Little Pony: OP Girls in my head... that exact same thing... My God it's as if even I, a slightly respected, half way decent, more or less unlikeable writer could write these with the smallest of efforts. Oh I know! You can do the intro everything up until Sunset Shimmer is defeated while Twilight is asleep... and now I've figured out the season four finally... Dang it I really could write this...
Also I figured you wouldn't spoil it for real. I just love overreacting and ideas! Ideas are friends... not enemies... and now I have more OP season four finales. I need to get back to my stories.
Lol!!! Pinkie was screaming longer then the others, then Rainbow Dash covered her mouth after that, that's funny!!
Awesome Work, Ocalhoun!!
5052757
Hm... I think for it to still be Equestria Girls, Twilight needs to go to the other universe.
Then she can see the crown in the display case, smash the case, and take it back home.
5053058
Good, good.
I did a joke that isn't in all the other episodes!
5053061 I suppose so... or at least long enough to collect her human friends and tell them to be friends with the now banished Sunset Shimmer. Whatever I'll just let you handle that and I'll read it in the future.
5050752
And considering that they didn't enjoyed the Gala...
Don't you know you should teleport strangers?!
What if they had a knife?!
Or a book?!
Or a knife concealed in a book?!
Is this just a bunch of chapters containing alternate endings? (not that that's a bad thing)