Fredrick falls into Equestria and he is allowed to stay in the castle for his troubles. There, he meets and quickly befriends Princess Luna, and their quickly evolving relationship allows them to explore the 'benefits' of being close, best friends.
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5364573
that title of cod is hilarious.
That ending! xD
Wouldn't be suprised if it gets close to rape, just for celestia or Luna (maybe both?) to rescue him JUST in time
Insert Yakkity Sax here.
ALL OF MY YES!!!
5462282 Hey there mate.
well then, run dude run
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stay classy
run Freddy run.
or just stop and give her a good hard rutting. hum I would run Luna is way more important then just sex.
Seeing updates to this fic makes me so happy.
RUN FORREST RUN!!!
God, I hope this stops being featured soon. That cover picture creeps the hell out of me every time it pops up on the front page. Christ, talk about hideous.
Benny hill theme time? Benny hill theme time.
Nice description.
Oh god..... He must nope the fuck out of there
I could see him be like "nopenopenopenopenope so much Nope!"
Is it weird that I read this line in TFS Alucard's voice?
Oh, thank God
That scared the fuck outta me, I thought she was a changeling
Seriously, that would've ruined the whole story
5462890 I was gonna say the same thing
I found the ending to be hilarious.
Repetition, I know it is in dialog but it is kinda funny how people still seem to avoid repeating themselves when talking.
Not that there's anything wrong with that.
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I have noticed you have this habit of repeating words in dialog.
QUICK! Pawn her off on some guard!
I probably didn't catch as much this time around. Late night and early morning reading isn't the best for my brain.
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I narrated it with morgan freeman and neil degrasse tyson, so no, its not weird.
oh hell
Run and run fast.
Now if Luna was to see this...
5462782 Note to self, get featured more.
5462802 I was actually thinking the same thing for a moment lol
5463126 Yeah it appears I had a lapse in thought a few times where I forgot the words I used in the dialogue. I fixed that though, thanks.
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It's good to have goals in life. :-)
love how the comments here are usually the Forest Gump quote of 'run forest, run', but very little love for the Scary Movie quote of 'run bitch, run'
I mean COME ON!!!, Luna made Fred her bitch in her study, it's so suitable right now
5462782 I have the same issue with the cover. It's solely because of how Luna's face was drawn, though.
There is something about this story.
What is it?
It is the ability to take simple phrases and situations, including the one at the end, and make them into a full-on explosion of perfection.
THAT QUOTE WAS IN PARENTHESES. HOW IN THE BLOODY HELL IS IT SO DAMN FUNNY?!
Fuck it, I'm re-faving this.
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I think we are both happier for not knowing what goes on in the heads of people who go from "hippopotamus-faced mutant abomination" to "omg so hot."
Found an error in the story
Replace had with "hand" and all is well.
5464682 Indeed! Thanks for catching that
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I am still reading this, so I may find more later.
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No problem. At least Luna was able to have some release. No sure if Fredrick had a good enough drink at the water fountain though.
5464700 Fuckin' lol. Luna will do him right, literally and figuratively
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I hope that doesn't imply Fred will be ridden hard? A broken pelvis would lay someone up for a long time... though he would still have a workable mouth...
Maybe they could come to some agreement. Like Luna gets off and a certain human gets to be force fed something other than water. Not that Luna is extremely dominant, but if she is anything like that maid mare; Fred has to worry about being smeared over the floor.
Nice ending to the chapter.
Fredrick for god's sake let the mare ride you!
5464762 Eh, not yet at least. Take a head of state with all the literal power in the world, a demi-goddess. Way I see it, she's got a MAJOR submissive side... but as shown, can easily force things her way. With the way she cares about Fred, she'll make sure he's taken care of.
P.S i am hoping for fredrick to run into celestia while she is changing or in the nude
Well technically friends with benefit imply that Frederic is in his right to see other mares, just as Luna other stallions, yeah this little mare is a bit hot for something but its looks like more of just one simple, 'please it hurt, rut me like an animal' kind of thing, maybe Celestia and Luna could not be so mad with Frederic if he DO IT if it was because is just to help a poor lady to release her pain.
Further more, they need to keep things quiet, if a lady that is not in pain ask him, he will had to be careful when rejecting them from now on
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I guess I like the idea of dominatrix Luna. But I can see how having all that power and importance could create a fetish for being a powerless pet.
Holy shit, werfer, was that some seriously hot mare-eating action. That's the kind of read that gets a reader off without assistance.
5463481 Something tells me Fredrick's next protein meal would be pony puree were Luna to see it.
that's going to be fun good job keep it up
5465769 *tips top hat* I aim to please... not literally but. Okay maybe a bit literally
Guards! Help me! The castle staff wants MY staff!
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Somepony new would be visiting the moon.
Sanctuary! Someone give him sanctuary damn it!
For a second I thought that changelings were afoot. Good chapter by the by.