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The Cardboard Box


A box filled with pastel ponies. Learned to write to keep itself entertained until Moving Day.

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THIS IS BAD This "Story" does not reflect my current content. You've been warned.

A quiet bartender has a chat with Flash Sentry during an unplanned thunderstorm.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 15 )

I'm tempted to ask who/what exactly Buttercream is, given his manner of speaking, and how did he get there.

I want to know more, but of course it's understandable if you aren't going to write more, heh. :derpytongue2:

4864082 I kinda teased on purpose. :rainbowwild:
Maybe...

Sneaky Twilight, real sneaky.

4864840 Oh. Well that's kinda the point.

4866944 He's just an OC. Hence the "OC" character tag.
I made him to be confusing to the reader so that they'd want to know more.

Wow! For a first fic, this is exeptional! If you could take time to write longer and have a better plot, this could become a very great story! :scootangel:

4909785 Nope.
I refuse to take this comment as true.
I literally wrote this at 2 o'clock in the morning to try to throw off a caffiene high.
There is absolutely no possible way it could be good.
None.

Understandable. You should write when your tired more often! :twilightsmile:

hey remember me? i'm the guy with the fic almost no-pony likes :D and it seems i've found competitiong :rainbowdetermined2: oh...wait... you already won ah well gg man gg

4942140 Eh, I didn't write it to be good OR bad. It just kinda exists.

4943546 me neither mine just ended up terrible

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