How do Pegasi learn to fly? Rainbow Dash is about to find out.
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TheLunarCelestia
Sup. I'm gonna go write stories now.
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That was a really cute little one shot. Except it's euphoric, not uphoric.
How do pegasi fly.
Oh and pegasus, pegasi and pegasususususus should not be capitalised, as they're common nouns.
Oh and
Though.
Sorry i'm being so nit-picky. It's just who I am, they're many more like me on this site, so beware!!
Oh and I would recommend that you have someone read through your work before you post it, to check for any silly mistakes.
4856049
Pointing out a mistake isn't being nitpicky.
Nitpicky is when you get into the really anal stuff, like comma placements, semi-colons, ellipses, etc.
4856118 Well, it's nitpicking to me
4856508
4856118
Thank you both for reading the story and (hopefully) liking it... The reason that most of the errors exist is because I typed this whole thing on my ipod, soo....
Yeah.
Also, another reason those errors are there is because I have a severe case of lacking an editor/proofreader.
I shall now go fix those things.
Also, nitpicking, though annoying sometimes, doesn't bother me too much...
Now, if you're an a jerk about it, then...
Not so much.
God, I never stop talking, do I?
4855309 oh crap... I forgot about you... Thanks!
4856508
Fair enough.
4857533
It's a good story. I personally felt it could've done with some expansion, but for what it was, it was enjoyable enough.
4858983 thanks. I try to write longer stories, but I guess it's like there's this thing inside my head that somehwhat halts my brain function thus preventing me from writing longer stories.
That makes sense, right?
4861423
Uh, sure ...
4863826 if you're confused, I confused myself with that one too...
...That...was...precious...~!