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.......Changlings....why is it always changlings?
Heavy Approves!
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David, you're a freaking WIZARD for catching Celestia off guard. The fun will indeed be doubled Luna.images.mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/img/mlfw986_TheFunHasBeenDoubled.PNG
me wondering what mad david is like
And the new word of the day is:
winsome
Finally! I've been waiting FOREVER for this chapter! Awesome job!
SO CUUUTE
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that lsat line... really?
I was waiting for that quote!
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Yes! Hugs are always welcomed!
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What's wrong with that? I thought it added to the playfulness of the scene?
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I thought it would be appropriate. Besides, I loved it when Luna said that in "Luna Eclipsed"! BTW love your avatar pic!
707974 still...
Gah, the romance is getting so sickly sweet that I'm afraid I might get diabetes. Not sure if want
God, I really enjoy this story but the cynic inside the keeps clobbering all the over done love, however:
The doctor approves on my behalf: (I love this picture)
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I am loving this story. However I feel the 'honeys' and 'loves' and being overdone somewhat. My suggestion is to tone them down a little, for fear that the meaning becomes diluted (inb4 misspelling of that, i'm on phone. Be nice! )
All in all, keep at it!
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Yeah, sorry about that. I may have gotten a little carried away with terms of endearment. Consider them toned down for the rest of the story. And don't worry about "diluted" (BTW you spelled it correctly) But even if you hadn't I would have been nice. After all, you took the time to read my story and offer me a helpful comment!
Once upon a time, I was falling in love, now I'm only falling apart,
Nothing I can do, total eclipse of the heart.
Once upon a time I was falling in love, now there's only love in the dark,
Nothing I can say, total eclipse of the heart!
Ah my heart.
I don't think it can take much more diabetus inducing love
Also the fun has indeed been doubled.
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Thanks for the comment. I guess the world is really starved for romance, when this chapter's display seems to keep overwhelming everypony. But not to worry. If you can stomach one more chapter like this (uh I will be doing my best to tone it down some), the story will continue to advance come chapter 9. I just wanted to use chapters 7 & 8 to work on the relationship of my two main characters.
And yes the fun has been doubled! Thank you to everyone who has continued to support this story! Chapter 8 is well underway!
728013 are you going to touch on the whole" they had sex" thing meaning she might get pregnant. (that is if you want to do that). also i can not help but chuckle when they get like that. (playful and kid like that is)
This story is like drinking chocolate syrup. So sweet it is almost gross, yet I still love it!
*note, PonyJesus does not suggest drinking that for real*
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If you read Chapter 2 and Chapter 3, you will remember that Luna and David have already had sex twice now. I just toned down the details and made the scenes more about the emotions and bond they were feeling, rather than making it too much like a clopfic. I was leery about making the love scenes too detailed for this story. I want it to be more about the romance, but if done tactfully, a love scene won't make you feel like you're reading porn. As of yet, I'm not sure if I want to have Luna get pregnant. That may be a plot element for way down the road. It's too soon to tell. And I'm glad you enjoy their playfulness. I thought it would help add to the romance and help build upon their relationship.
Though there is one detail about chapter 8 I am willing to share! (Mild Spoiler Alert): Things are leading up to a third love scene involving David & Luna.
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Yeah, I know the romance can be a little overpowering at times...but I love it anyway! You're right though, it can be like drinking chocolate syrup. I know because when I was little, I actually took a swig from a syrup bottle. It's not bad at first...but then it does get gross. Though honestly, the romance (at least for me) is something I enjoy. That's why I've tried to put at least one or two scenes minimum per chapter where Luna and David do something together. Even if it's something as simple as eating lunch, or sitting under a shady tree together.
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There! The error has been fixed. But honestly given that I work all night shift, I'm amazed I haven't made more silly errors like that one. Though calling it unforgivable. That's a bit harsh. At least give a person a chance to fix an error, they may be unaware of, before branding it "unforgivable".
this is awesome
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No, David is not her first special somepony. And if you read Luna's words in chapter 2, you'll recall she said and I quote:
“You see it’s been a very long time since I’ve been comforted by someone special like you. There is no one else back in Equestria quite like you. That’s why…I’d like it…if you’d help me find some needed release,” she spoke gazing at him with her bedroom eyes.
So you see, David is Luna's first special somepony since her return from the moon. And while I haven't yet gone into detail about it, Luna hasn't had anyone special since she started down the road that eventually led to her becoming Nightmare Moon.
This is definitely the best Fanfiction I have ever read. You are a truly gifted writer, please keep writing more stories like this!
I got one chapter to go and then I'm caught up. However, I too
work graveyard and hear the clarion call of sleep. Two thumbs-up, bravo and Huzzah!
705561 no you have beat me you basterd all tho i have ben defeated to it but still THE HAS BEN DOUBLED ok good chapter
Realy the fun has been doubled that fricking awsome dude
986513 if you like stories like this you really really should read Xenophillia by Anonauthor/anyponyDASHIE it is a lot like this except more on the romance side not that much adventure
hey dear i expect complete this fic and in the meantime I stop at chapter 8
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Glad you're enjoying it. Currently, I'm working on chapter 11. I've got a little over 2,200 words done. I certainly plan on finishing this, and it will be among my top three projects I'll be focusing on.
That moment when the "fun has been doubled" reference is finally made.
Have you ever read this story of mine? - "Cherishing the Night"
And I won't say which, but I have a story in mind where a pony does get pregnant to a human, that's in addition to the fic I listed above. Let's just say Equestria is a land of endless possibilities.
Huzzah! The fun has been doubled!
Okay I am only on chapter 7 but I'm going to say right now at this moment that the mist is nightmare moon so when Im right in like 3chapters I can dance around like an idiot whilst screaming "I FUCKIN CALLED IT!!"
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I know the comment is old but still. The fic "even a princess has feeling" has celestia and a human have a child. And there's a sequel that follows the child. (Has the same name but is the chronicles of the child)
Both are really good too if you haven't read them. Plenty of action (both kinds "wink, wink" and tugs the heartstrings.)
I wasn't too sure about this rewrite, but now that I've read a few chapters I know that it is even better than before.
David is such a doormat bitch. The proper thing would have been to smash Blueblood's face into the table and then start choking him.
5317962 no no no. Nightmare Moon was one of the THREE to start the prophecy so I doubt it will be her. Unless the creater of the story wants to make nightmare Moon the mist then it will happen